Typical plot where a chick comes in and just hangs onto the main character's legs and he just accepts it instantly how disappointing. Doesn't help either as he is also poor when he got transmigrated it's just so easy to guess what happens from then I'm just...
Synopsis made me interested in the novel, but after reading the first chapter, I was already seeing some potential problems with the MC and plot - the foreshadowing turned out to be true. Novel was dissapointing to say the least.
This book is very good at starting, and here is what I mean. We first see that this guy is looking through something to find a cure for himself. Then, the book introduces who he is and how he got that point. It's a way to start the story without having to tell the background first.
This novel description seems very much interesting ?? and it even a new kind of a novel...................................................................
it blatant copy paste from "the legendary mechanic" same prologue, same power system, same code name "zero
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i gave a 5 stars okay? so dont drop it......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing was good, albeit with some small, but noticeable grammar errors and awkward syntax(Grammarly helps for those.).The story, characters, and the world, all seem to be developing quite nicely into a story that has a focus on some sci-fi elements and fantasy ones, a combination that a lot of people are bound to like.Plot is also not messy or jumbled up, and instead, concise and simple to understand.Good work.
Honestly, a very good concept and story that gives of house of horror vibes. Slight spelling and grammatical errors and it also feels as if some parts were missing , but still good
I am amazed. I have been continuously reading this novel…. I can’t put it down. Story is good, the scope of the universe building is good, and the characters are still being themselves is good. The only difficulty I am experiencing is the multitude of cultivation realms and remembering them. There are a lot and the names aren’t easy to remember. Otherwise, this is a terrific novel.
Really loving the story so far! The pacing is a bit fast but I think that’s one of the things I like about it lol. I’m curious to see if you are going to bring in any characters from the original story as well. (hope that you do!) Thank you for the good read and I hope it continues! 10/10
Bad translation and too cliche.............................................................................................................