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It has mention of an incest waifu? Instant 10/10. GOTY. 10/10. It’s officially the best book ever. Everyone else might as well stop competing.
Great bookgood jobWell doneThis book has great potential I hope you shine bright and reach the international streams too
Here is my review about this novel.Character: So far I really like the characters in this story. The family dynamic between the characters, Thomas, Aurora, and Lila are healthy and support each other. I also like Aurora characters with each chapter opening bit by bit about her mysterious power. I even like Aurora power attracted some dangerous being like the shadows to hunt her down, making it more intense. Gideon as a villain is pretty fine with the creepy vibe especially with him. so obsesssed to hunt down Aurora and his creepy presence everytime he showed upWorldbuilding: So far the description of rhe world is quite beautiful and well detailed. I also like the author gave little bit of lore for the world. I do like to see more expansion about it.Pacing: So far the pacing of the plot is quite smooth and engaging too. Overall, if you like fantasy story with family dynamic, I recommended this book.
well sometime it nice to have a different kind of story
It's an exciting book with Jasmine's determination about father, it's really a bold one
The idea of the novel is great, and I like to see the constant progress the mc is making, keep it up author!
The first person to like their own work should be its author.Hello, this is the Author. If you like the story, or have any criticism, leave your review here, it help me to improve and know what readers think about what I write.Finally, thank you for reading, and I hope you have fun on this journey!
I have read every chapter of this novel in one day, the story is excellent and the characters are real. You feel for them and want to know more, I am not spoiling any of this book I will just tell you to read it you will be very happy you did.
The story is good the character design is good but you can improve tham can't say about word building because it's only chapter but i think it will be great and you can improve this too the idea of adrenaline rush is good it's unique and make sense overall good start keep it up?
I normally don't give reviews to translations, but I am compelled to tell that this NBA fanfic translations is perhaps the only honored one, when it comes to NBA fanfiction.The goat Bloodrunk not only emits out a lot of the usual stuff you generally see in CN fics, but also adds their own spin, like TNT, explanations on in-game terminology, and really funny trash-talking. There is much more, but I mainly focus on these few points which not only adds depth to the original story, but really elevates the story as something unique.Yes, it does become cliche that the MC, Han Sen wins majority of the time, or uses foreknowledge to benefit himself, or really just continues to rage bait into oblivion, but this is part of the identity that the novel evokes. The only issue? Waiting for more chapters. I can wait so long as the good. But honestly, I blitzed this in 2 days, and woke up the next morning just to read this till my phone died. TLDR: just faking read it.
I have A long Wey to go and I’m willing to take any sort crtisime to get Better and I am going to take it one chapter at a time