Did you write this book under a different name before? I remember dropping a similar title when he mistakes the girl from her relative in the tentEither way, the way the MC is built is sister needs to be saved, top priority, but he keeps making risky choices instead of just getting the money he needs then developing steadily like he should. It really makes no sense
This is a solid novel. The author takes an authentic approach to the characters discovery and understanding of the world. If not a little naive. I do have some hiccups with it though. In the first ten chapters the author seems to searching for the characters personality. Each new chapter the MC has a new outlook on life. When he is handing over the money he is confident, arrogance and vengeful but also caring and generous. The next chapter in game the character is a coward who flinches when someone gets near him. It doesn’t make sense, just cause he is LVL 1 does that mean he will cower and not give a simple letter to a drunkard. It felt forced and out of place of the story.
This is really a top tier book so far.I didnt notice any sort of bad writing quality, but I am also not particulary picky. Since there are only 19 chapters out atm, I cant really judge, but what I can say is, that the chapters are all VERY long. I really love that. They also dont feel stuffed or as if he tries to reach some wordcount, so I am happy. Cant say much about the story yet, but so far its very solid. However, my only negative point with this is that there will be no romance according to the tags, which is actually a shame. I dont need a harem or anything, but a book is just not 5 Stars without romance. Maybe Author can be persuaded to add a romance of some sort? Character design seems solid, they dont all have the same personality and seem to have realistic motivations and stuff. The world background is very nice. I like the whole setting and the explaining of the world is certainly not dry. Some parts about the world are unclear yet, but I assume that the MC will find out or reveal it later in the story. So, all in all, seems like a solid story so far. But for the love of god, PLEASE add romance. Doesnt have to be fanatic or smth, just some playful banter and stuff with a gf so he wont be lonely at the top.
Their is no overarching plot as of now. Characters are very 2 dimensional. The world development is decent but nothing to write home about. In fact i am giving it a decent rating as the way it is being unveiled it seems promising but at 40 chapters i can't say for sure. But the story flows quite smoothly and the writing is decent. I rather prefer these type of novels despite the lack of originality because they don't have a problem with their pacing and flows unlike most of original novels.
weird wording and many basic mistakes..............................................................................................
This novel really can't be seen as more than an amateurish fanfic.Ideas are copied, events rushed, the usual clichés and tropes are there, being its bread and butter... and unfortunately, the translation needs some more work, too.If you have nothing else to read, you can give it a try, but I'd suggest to first check out the novels from which the author "took inspiration" from, as "Perfect World" and "Sovereign Of The Three Realms
This is a very bad novel as a whole. Why? Because this is the meeting point of 2 previous novels, WDQK and BTTH, with their own cliffhanger. Instead of developing the world setting using those 2, the author developed a whole new setting instead, making the whole thing more complex. I don't mind if the author can handle it but he couldn't. Incoherency is very obvious when 2 of them begin to converge with this and the 2 MCs from those 2 novels is just like your mob character with less luck than MC even though the reintroduction was grandly described. Even more annoying is what were cliffhanged at those 2 novels aren't explained in here either, merely showing the aftermath. Therefore, I conclude this as badly executed/planned novel. It'd be a lot better if this don't have any connections to those 2 novels and could be a decent novel as a separate universe. Less hype, gimmick, and drama.
Don't read it if you hate brain dead mc, not just mc every character is stupid but the mc is the most stupid for me...............................................
the main character has a very likeable character and the story is good looking forward of how is he gonna make girlfriends haha though he hates love
I wouldn't waste my time reading this. Nothing against the translators, but the author did NOT write a good story. The plot is nonexistent and includes stupid tricks and plot armour. The world building is tripe. The COINCIDENCES and actions of the characters are just fucking annoying to the extreme.
wish you the best with your story!!
Is there a second book?