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Wonderful keep it up..... ....... ....,...
Bro i suggest you to improve plot development well. Because its kinda messy, i cant follow the plot at all, so im kinda lost..overal great story so far..good job
It is actually pretty good so far. I liked the beginning far better than the grand duelist, another book made by the author. The premise is basically a demi-god or inhuman being who was the writer of fate in the future, dies and reincarnates. He is trying to reach the apex of what he once was. Or this is the premise of what I can tell.
Yes, a bit too much like BTTH, but still its own storyline. I have seen this plot too many times to become invested. The plot does move if that is your kind of thing.
This is not a review I just have a question. Is this novel dropped. The author hasn't updated the novel in like 2 months. This novel actually had a decent story and the world building was also going good. But now it seems its another dropped novel.
Loved the story's background and setting as well as the characters I read. The author has a vivid imagination and has created a world for us to enjoy! Great Job!
Novel is fine, I'd recommend trying it out. Not a huge fan of the MC, just my opinion......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm going to be honest - I read these chapters in one sitting and I don't regret a single minute. The pacing is relentless in the best way. Chapter 16 starts with the tiger fight, which is high-octane action, then transitions smoothly into the aftermath where Wen Lan loots shops while everyone else is still inside the supermarket. That brief quiet moment where she's just... grabbing stuff... is perfect because it gives you a breath before the next bomb drops. Then Zhou Feng arrives and the pacing SNAPS into a completely different gear. What could have been a slow dramatic reunion instead becomes a full-blown brawl within seconds. Wen Che doesn't even let him finish a sentence. And the chapter ends on this weirdly domestic note with the Fo-Ti knocking over and sprouting a vine at Zhang Meng - which is both funny and slightly unsettling. The author knows exactly when to accelerate and when to let the reader exhale. The only moment I wanted to skim was Zhang Meng's internal monologue about Zhang Ye at the very end, but honestly it sets up future tension so it works. My only complaint is that I want to know what happens next RIGHT NOW because the cliffhanger energy is real.
The alternative ending killed me :0 James is adorkable!!!! How can someone be so damn cute?! What about all the talking?! Gosh I practically have a boner 10 out of 10 simply perfect, a masterpiece!!!! Hope that you make a continuation! I'm waiting for my baby James (ᗒᗩᗕ)
This book would have potential but in my point of view...?For one MC can fight with beings that are waaaaaay stronger than him yet his strength is at level 6! like WHAT????!!!!!!!Secondly the imbalance between his stats is just a joy like...let me explain am a chap 47 and throughout the whole time he only adds points to he's intelligence ? yet he's so fast and defits beings stronger than him. Yes I know ? it helps his mana but isn't strength agility and whatnot required and I think that's one of the reasons this book is lagging so muchAlso what is this no gender balance. MC doesn't fight women like I get be respectful but he's in a world of dog bite dog a woman can kill , fight and does many more to men and vice versa can happen yet MC does fight women ??Honestly I come & go cause I need FP & also am bored but this novel would have done better but it lacks alot . I personally wouldn't have continued this book but the more read the more you think about it .I hope MC improves not only psychically but mentally tooTho he reincarnated he's stupid ?anyways I hope I get I reply cause I need some motivation to continue.but it isn't a bad book just would never make it to top 50
Is it just me or am I the only one that think the red shorthaired girl in the cover is a girl?Why do I think she's a girl? Just look at her clothes and you will notice it.So, are the MC Male or Female?Regardless, the word summon in the title is enough for me to vote for it, so vote for it too everyone! Since it looks interesting.Going to give 5* for now since I look forward to the novel.