FantasyDragon
The actual football content is good, the games are described in good detail, tactics are in place and you can suspend your disbelief to enjoy a super goalkeeper. What’s dragging this story down by this point (chapter 200) is the increased focus on the Chinese National team, it’s all nonsense. The league is corrupt? Disband the entire league, sack the management, naturalize 10 Spanish players and win the World Cup (it’s getting there, the MC has conceded 2 goals in 2 years, and that’s because it was Messi and Ronaldo). It’s getting ridiculous, you can have a story about the national football team, but be realistic, you have a miraculous goalkeeper you never concedes goals, good, but then your problem is the attack. It would make more sense for the Chinese team to advance in the World Cup because of MC but in the end failing because they can’t score. That way it’s satisfying to readers because MC proves his worth but it’s also realistic in that the Chinese team is nothing to write home about. I was enjoying this story, but as the World Cup keeps getting dragged in its getting more stale and boring. 3/5 for the first 180 chapters, then going downhill
Terrible around chapter 800 all chapters repeat. Absolutely trash not worth the read
This is very good! I’m looking forward to more!
Great read so farKeep it up author and release more chapters
WHY DOESN'T THIS HAVE MORE VIEWS? finally.. an amazing story on web novel that I haven't read! the writing is top notch and I read all the chapters in one sitting! love it so far
CruCruMonsta HOW DARE YOU! I have one word for you people. SHOWBIZand another TRANSMIGRATIONand another EPICI've only read a few chapters of this book so far but I was bestowed upon the honor of perusing this astronomical book before it was published. The storyline and the creativity in all the elements put together got me hook line and center. I've always been a fan of showbiz but oh man. The fact that our dear MC here was a King and not able to chase his dreams, then he transmigrated, became a novice and got that opportunity... maybe I'm being sentimental but I'm so excited for this journey. If you guys haven't stopped reading this and started reading the book by now....imma be disappointed!Finally, a few last words to the author,CruCruMonsta I believe in you and I be supporting you all through this journey so don't give up. I hope to see you soar far into the heavens (not dead ofc) and you also chase your dreams. don't drop or I kill
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I LOVE THIS BOOK!!!! The descriptions and overall writing style, characters, and plot are amazing. They all are very unique. Rowan is very cute, and Wren deserves all the pastries!!
I've been reading your books for a while now and I felt like this needed to be done.
Jk, I was planning on doing this a while ago but never got to it, anyways, as I said before I've been following you for more than a year now, and I've watched as you developed your style and bettered your skills. Though, I wish you'd pick up your novel, the plundering demon: Mammon, I know your probably busy since your a high school student as well, and junk, and I'm satisfied with what I've read up here, but...
Ok, maybe there's no but's in my head right now, though, from what I just read in the latest chapter, chap 173, things seem to be getting good, and it seems like your planning on doing something to connect the timelines by the way your list is set up, but I wanted to tell you not to strain yourself doing this, I read in your comment about what you said, and you really need to take your time before you end up hurting yourself. Thanks all I wanted to say now.
Take care, and lots of love TurtleMaster?
i want to read it quickly but i cant find it anywhere on any other website than here so update it asap
