Thank you for sharing your talent for storytelling :-) I hope your novel is offered free again lol I have enjoyed it so far ??⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️??
It was a really great story just like a real life experience like it really happens when you are about to confess your feelings to someone so it was a great feeling reading such a story and i am eagerly waiting for the next part to come as soon as possible
it has great potential but there are some things that are just stupid why this novel is bad 1 abilities are op when they are just common example: an archer goblin has a skill that makes you invisible If you are still and not breathing I said why it is op in a paragraph comment when it got introduced(it basically is perfect for ambush hiding and confusing your enemy) archer goblins have a skill called archers reinforcement or something it gives an enchantment to ALL weapons not only bows all weapons a sage has a skill that shows every living being in 100 meters ( it hard counters assassin's with stealth making them useless and remember this is a common skill and there are like 5 more ranks) 2 the mc can hit small targets from a distance with a bow without missing when it's the first time that he uses one ( he doesn't have any skills that help with aiming or stats that help yet) the same with a sword he became an expert with 1 hour of experience3 I found an exploit ? when he enslaves a monster ( with a skill) he can give it a name when it gets a name it evolves meaning it gives more xp when killed and also gets an additional skill which he can devour ? my opinion of the novel: if you don't care if the system or character makes sense read it if you don't like bad quality go as far away from this piece of art :)
I like this novel a lot so far. The MC is fairly fun and has a neat outlook on a lot of situations. While a lot of the same old tropes are hit, they are usually met with some unique or interesting twist. As long as the quality doesn't dip I can't complain about this book. Very good read.
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Intriguing story. Hooked me from the very first line. Good work
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I just have to say, WOW?I love these kind of stories, the plot, twists, everything is on top, love love love love love it ???????????
very nice story please keep up the good work, i really am enjoying this story you have a real talent and please don't stop writing. i would love to see the continuation of this book.
I wonder why a hero. old 5 iPhone, when can it have a new Chinese android, with great functionality? For less money ?!The beginning is very exciting!Why ask obvious questions? Is there a reason for the end of the world to pay for the idiotic actions of people who annihilate each other, instead of grooming and cherishing each other? Resources, money, above justice, above humanity ?! And what do you want? Why ask such stupid questions?And it seems that the Americans are Protestants, so that they would not ask such questions, something here somehow does not fit very well in the text.It seems I’ve already read somewhere ... and the book was called ... "The Death of the Dragon" - a science fiction novel by Japanese writer Sakyo Komatsu ... apparently a short story remake?But no?! This is something else ... interesting ... on chapter 6 I wanted to drop a short story ... I thought sadly ... but here is chapter 11, I was interested ... author, well done ... knows how to hook ... but for now I'm not sure that I will not drop the short story, but I will wait for chapter 12 ... but for now I will include the short story in the library. There is something wavy in this short story. The reader is in no hurry to evaluate the work in only a few chapters, read more ... and you will understand that this short story is not so interesting, it may well become a very curious story, from which you can’t tear yourself away. Well, it all depends, of course, on the skill of the author. Usually a novel is read if a beautiful word, that is, a form of text or interesting content. If both factors exist, then this short story becomes a masterpiece. So far I have been able to read only a few such works.The author writes in an interesting, fascinating, exciting, genre - natural disaster was common in 2000. Everyone predicted something ... as history says, mankind is constantly afraid of the end of the world, my dears, do not do bad deeds, you will not have reasons to worry about the end of the world.An author can create a dramatic situation.I rate work at 4.8 out of a possible 5 stars.The author of good luck and hard work!
I really liked uniqueness this story offers. It certainly reminds me the movie benjamin button where the protagonist was born an old man and as he grows his body turns back to infant. Would certainly recommend this to others!
Great book, Is a joy to read,one best books i have read one this site just hopes it stay free so every can injoy the this master piece of a book