47 chapters 8-12-23
Exciting!nice story
I like this book! I hope it be a part 2.
I love the way u hv portrayed ur FL.
Strong and Independent.
The plot is also very catchy.❤❤❤?
Great work
This is interesting, first time reading this type of theme in a bl, hope it's won't be disappointing
the story was good until you inserted a child within. I'm just not a fan of stories with third party forever after
5 stars... the novel is absolutely worth it ❤️. Trust me, just start reading, you won’t regret it.
It really doesn’t deserve to be so underrated. The main character and love interest are beautifully portrayed. (Not a fragile main character and not an overbearing love interest)
The story is really engaging and humorous?, and full of sweet misunderstandings ?.
And please, don’t judge the novel by reading machine translations. Wait for the official translation ??.
It's a humorous take on a typical Japanese novel, where the protagonist triumphs over the world not within the usual 10-year timeframe as seen in Chinese stories, but an astonishing 1 year! An 17-year-old conquers the entire world that quickly –Wow, that's even more extreme than Chinese novels. The fact that the story is condensed to just a year makes it feel like the 'real' narrative is yet to come, and the first part turns into a joke. I'm curious how the character effortlessly conquers the intricate magical realms of the gods, almost too easily and without any significant accomplishments.
In summary, if you're willing to overlook logic and common sense, this novel might be your cup of tea. However, do not dwell on the time spent in the other world, as it becomes a comedic aspect.
This is an incredibly captivating read, no exaggeration; it ranks among the most intriguing novels I've ever had the pleasure to devour. The storyline is exceptional, with each character standing out in their unique way - their growth is utterly engaging, and the dynamics between them are truly one-of-a-kind. What sets this book apart is its focus not solely on objectives and conflicts, but also on the intricate relationships that form the backbone of all the drama. Whether it's friendships, family ties, romance, or even complex connections, these elements are integral to the plot's authenticity, enhancing the narrative flow seamlessly.
I'm not the most articulate, but let me assure you, you won't regret giving it a read. This novel is an absolute delight from start to finish – a true gem that captivates the heart and mind.
I've tackled lengthy web novels with over a thousand chapters, but novels often feel excessively drawn out, frustratingly so. Your translations are consistently impressive, but the author tends to stretch things for suspense, making the climax feel anticlimactic since you've already guessed what's coming. It's exasperating when a simple point is repeated unnecessarily within a chapter – we get the message.
The constant repetition of thoughts inside characters' heads is also grating; in one chapter, where just a few minutes of action take place, half the content is devoted to a single character's introspection. Violet's unwavering determination not to forgive or care is commendable, but the writing style becomes unbearable at times. I'm curious how others manage to endure it.
To be completely honest, although this isn't the worst thing I've come across, I doubt I'll revisit it in the future. The storyline is rather conventional, and the characters lack depth. It's more of a book to enjoy without too much mental engagement, in my view. The translations are decent, but they're working with a limited source material.
However, towards the end, when their "separation" happens – where she temporarily returns to her own world – I must admit, I was emotionally touched. I empathized with their despair at the prospect of never seeing each other again and found myself shedding tears during the resolution. As the author puts it, "despite its flaws, I'm grateful for this experience."
Despite that emotional moment, I still don't expect myself to reread it. Overall, I'd give it three stars.
Supreme magus is nowhere near as good as shadow slave