I think this is a very good book the writing quality starts off fairly bad but definitely gets better later on. the characters are interesting and the plot is developing well. One thing I have to say is so far when characters are having discussions for plans they don't seem as well thought out as they should. dialogue also seems a little stiff in some places but for as how to fix that and if it improves later on in the book, I am not sure. I have only read up to chapter 58 this far.
love this story and i look forward to reading morebut i have to ask when will it mention why his exis acting the way she is i mean did he do somethingfor her to treat him that way?
The worst story I’ve found on webnovel so far.............................................................................................................
There are only 2 chapters but you can see that this girl got the style and the soul of an experienced author. The writing Quality is top notch. Girls, if you like boy love stories then this one is certainly for you. Peace!
The translation so far is good although the system is nothing new the low starting point is pretty good and the relationship with his disciple is cute I want more
This is a fantastic, hilarious, and just all around awesome read that you should definitely give a try. A really great and funny main character and an awesome cast of supporting characters. I honestly don’t think you’re regret giving this book a try, at the very least try the first chapter to see how you feel about it, and you won’t be disappointed.
The current story is extremely slow, it’s been 20 chaps and the main character still doesn’t get what his power actually is.The translating quality is surprisingly good for most of it makes sense,the story development is somewhat predictable, of course it’s still is somewhat random but currently 50/50.World building is generic, the author doesn’t even try to make it unique in terms of the world building so far.
Ey whassup it's your boy Tobi here gonna do a review!Well, there aren't that many chapters yet but Tobi thinks it has potential to grow!Just don't be lazy Author!
A review up on til chapter 40..... he is the most borring thief yet!.. i had hope for this one.. that it would be about his stealing.. and the ways he would steal in, and who he would steal from.. like this nps or that nps.. and pitch them against each other.. and from that player and this player.. but maybe with a mask on so they coundt see his name.. its not! he is more of an Assassin then a thief at this point!.. he just kills monster and repeat that and try to do his skills.. so.. combat on combat on borring!.... Atleast up on til this point.. so if this is it then no ty.. i will pass!
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This is probably in the top 3 most enjoyable harem novels I’ve read. The main selling point being the charcters actually feel real. Each FMC has personaility, motivation, goals and feelings which creates realistic feeling interactions, all of which are enjoyable. The action is good, the romance is great, the story overall is fantastic. Stop reading other harem trash where girls have 2 brain cells and tap into this marvelous story.
I’ve read up to chapter 60 so far. The book is really enjoyable. The main character is both intelligent and ruthless, and the storyline itself is very interesting.From what I can see so far the author updates at a good pace.This book is well worth a read. ^^