Had enough. Deleted entirely in my library including whatever chaps downloaded. This is one of the worst stories ever encountered. Poorly written and worst character development of FL. Given her idiocy and skills, granted rebirth she should just live her life well instead of dragging people behind. She puts herself, the ML and her friends in danger just bec of her whims. Thats ok if u have the skills to protect that much people but she does not. Added to her bad habit of extracting revenge for people who doesn’t have anything to do with her. This story all in all is a bunch of frustrating characters, where all FL are malicious and all male characters are so easily manipulated which is so funny that makes the entire story ridiculous. Every 10 chapters are all the same. Her enemies would slander her and she would retaliate. Next 10 chaps again would be the same scenario and the next. Its a neverending same plot. Seriously. Weak foundation and lack of unique story plotline
I love this novel
Is this novel original or a translated one? if it's translated can i have the raw pls ?
its good in my opinion although the cultivation ranks could get confusing
[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021][Reading status: 8 chapters]-.-.-.-.-[Strong points:]- The lighter tone is kept throughout the chapters, giving it a fully blended humorous style fused with cultivation genre. - You must've seen many books with the particular fusion but what makes this book different (in my opinion) is the MC's savage personality.- The author has improved visibly in crafting out an MC with the flaw and at the same time with the geniuses and clear aim. The MC is consistently sharp with his tongue and playful.- Another aspect I laughed upon was the turning of cliches upside down, you'll know this when you reach chapter 5-7 - A reasonable amount of information in sprinkled in the initial chapters, which didn't make it hard to swallow that there are 3 girls with MC and a headmistress who is intrigued by him, along with the female receptionist who became chanted by him. - Another good aspect are vaguely displayed double meaning jokes, however in some places it's stated in clear words. But the lighter comedic tone didn't make it appear cringe.- I can foresee ha-rem (intentionally written like this cuz comments get deleted, it's a forbidden word) although I still believe that the MC is stuck with the 1st girl he met in chapter 1.- The relationship of MC's parents is itself kinda amusing, and I was really glad to read a powerful mother instead of weak and oppressive one. - The storyline is fused with 'system' too, which however didn't feel heavily influenced since it's a lo-li girl guiding the MC. Although the plot leaves numerous questions unanswered and to ponder. - The narration is highly readable, as far as in 8 chapters I didn't see any flaws and mistakes. The chapters have something intriguing to say to the readers.[Weakness:]- As far as in initial 8 chapters, none! -.-.-.-.-[Strong point: fast pace | adult comedy][Weak point: none in initial 8 chapters]
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At first I was skeptical, but after the first chapter I realized this was hilarious. The part when the main character gives the “dragon” To the officer had me rolling!I want to know more about his class, so please keep writing!
uh I guess it‘s kind of new? ??Really wonder if she ends up with many mls then I need to think about it ?Any spoilers? Like with whom did she end up with? None? 1 (who?)? Or even all? ?Pls let me know of the raw title ?
Hoping it gets picked Translation Quality - 5- because I haven't seen any translation mistakes except with the currency with yuan being used once but apart from that haven't seen anything that needs to be re-read multiple times so far Stability of Updates is N/A I don't think I need to explain that Story development -4- It's progressing fairly fast which is something I like so yh Character Design -4(3.5)- Nothing too out there or new but it's ok so far there really isn't much to say as there is only 15 chapters World Background -3- Haven't seen any good world-building as of yet it's almost like they're going through different levels in an RPG game but exceptional compared to the other choices So use this to decide whether you want to read I've kept any spoilers and shi out;any questions just use the comments
First 70 chapters are great. Story is about the MC farming, getting system rewards, and all around becoming OP. Then, it seems like the author dropped the novel, and got replaced by another. He joins a Supreme chat group, his junior sister finds out about him because he just randomly gives her some Phoenix blood essence but her reaction was simply ‘okay, cool! senior brother got some immortal encounters as a butterfly effect!’. The fights make no sense, the MC has every dao mastered but somehow finds a way to struggle to kill someone with only one Dao partially mastered. Enemies have more plot armor than any MC has ever had, with just about the entire Elderly population popping up out of nowhere screaming ‘junior you dare?!?’ If the novel didn’t drastically change after chapter 70ish, it would of been one of the greats.
Raw: 开局奖励一亿条命最新章节What is the meaning of life? I think, therefore I am, and thus I am Woodelf, the meaning of everything. If I claimed to be second beneath the heavens, no one would dare claim first.
Would normally give the story 4.5/5 but there's a lot of stories there are written 10x times worse and gets better scores than this one. I don't rly understand webnovel score system, but this story defnly deserves the 5 stars a lot more than a lot of other stories, so ig ill give it 5 stars. Very good story with good writing quality though there's some places with wrong grammar (it doesn't rly happen that often, so it doesn't rly matter in the end. sometimes things can be a lil vague, like with amy trying to seduce MC (know that I wasn't the only one who didn't get that) but overall its a solid story that ill keep reading.