Hello wonderful author here is my review. I love reading this novel and it's start. especially the twist where the Mc is now the deciple and she is the master. I wish you luck with your novel and I plan to continue reading. = )
Yo this is some gourmett level novel right here the only thing is i hope you make this super long take your time with the world building dont rush things and the harem should be slowly introduced and organically meshed well all the best
Cultivation is non existent. Everyone wants to kill you on sight. The Detective’s intuition is so supernatural that the author doesn’t need evidence. The 2 girls are annoying.Honestly dont try to do more than what you can handle author. Stick with the power fantasy sect building and it would have been better than what this is.
I started off loving this book. I actually read it MTL to finish it. everything was great, up until the finale. the last chapter had to settle everything, and I feel like the author just gave up at the end. it was so disappointing.
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by webnovel standards this is godly and by normal standards it is top tier in fluent translation and smooth writing good pacing no huge info dumps characters feel alive not monotonous or pure background, very praisewirthy start for a novel, did not see huge signs of bad writing or burnout which are the biggest obstacles for new novels, out of this this the only one with potential, unless a reincarnate of the sword god appears
After a very long time finally there's a good novel option to read and wait for it.. The writing was good, there was no problem in translation, story line was not rushed and characters seems have some depth I truly hope it get picked and continue in same way...
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say
author you done a great job ? writing this wonderful plot I am waiting for your book and I will vote for you please don't make me wait for it please release it soon
Not anything crazy but a decent story coupled with a good translation. A light and fun read.
Amazing novel but to a warning to others this novel has been dropped by the author at chapter 518, but it's still a great read. In my opinion I like this much more than IRAS. Oh and the romance is not bad as well, it does take a while to get started.
continue this one is very nice novel.............…5………5............................... ...............................................................