I enjoyed the latest chapter very much and thanks for the mass release author keep up the good work.Brilliant plot, good quality writing, and I like how you brought the Hindu culture about the devas and asuras and their realms in this novel and am waiting for them to make their appearance, but I know it will not happen so soon.
Just writing this for the free pass. Good luck
This… this is an absolute gem. I am in complete awe ? of how much story, character development, emotions, and plot is fitted so cohesively yet chaotically together that it sucks in all of my attention that I couldn’t stop reading and thoutoughly enjoying myself in just 17 chapters.It’s been too long since I’ve read a story that had me so invested into genuinely wanting a satisfying conclusion of a story. I want this story to do well and progress for as long as the author possibly can with the same quality he has presented us with.Thank you for writing.
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Basically this story is like an alternate history or alternate universe itself.Imagine this - you are reborn in another world where everything's an AU, a parallel world itself and there are different versions of the historical figures (Why not also have an OCs too?)For example, that world's Jose Rizal is alive. He's a doctor here and one of the ministers. There's no Katipunan.While there are plenty much to see here for this AU Philippines story, I think author should create or use more OCs whenever possible because it is an AU story itself and that the geopolitical climate there is highly and likely different.
A drunk Russian communist warrior.An angry Rogue cursing in Cantonese. An Italian who would sooner shoot people dead with words then with his arrows.An African American pointed his wand around like a gun, then pulled its imaginary trigger.And there's me, the typical Asian guy you will last pick for dodge ball team.This was my first ever VRMMO RPG team.This is the world of [Unlimited Dreams]. Huge thanks to @Creaking_Shadow for making this ridiculously good cover (≧◡≦)
The writing is very interesting and makes me really look forward to the upcoming developments. The world-building is detailed, too. Keep it up! I hope you continue to improve and succeed!
I read to chapter 60 for a reference point: Writing quality is good with what seems to be stable updates. Author may want to use a thesaurus to add more flavor to his text though. World building for both in game and the MCs world is progressing albeit slowly. Author needs to correct some errors in early chapters with the MCs lvl and maybe talk more about the games login times because I was left confused. Don’t think this one is for me right now but I hope the author keeps at it for his readers
I read until chapter 7, first of all; I like how the author uses different POV, the author is certainly good at switching POVs. Haru is such a nice guy; I like this kind of mc, will definitely stick to this story for Haru. Chapter 1 story telling about the general lore is well portrayed! Its makes me wonder what happened to the other heroes as well. I'm rating this 9/10, the remaining 1 is because it still has potential.
This is a great storyline, the writer is really good, almost at the edge of the novel ?. More comments incoming?
Nice work expecting more from you author ??
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