So far, so good, In the first chapters some may be repulsed by a very bizarre way of writting that they wouldn't be used to reading at all but I would recommend to stick around as the author makes fast progress as they write each chapters, of course, there are grammatical mistake but every story has them, the plot progresses at a good space, nor too fast nor too slow, in short, I would recommend you stick around and give this novel a read!
I enjoyed this novel a lot , though there were many plotholes in between due to author being in a rush but can be solved through imagination.The Thing is ....this novel will always be incomplete,reason is because new modoified version is super bad . Author was just overthinking about stuff, was really disappointed when i realised it , i even quit reading the new version since it was so boring.I am a guy who read supreme magus which is a slow paced story , so it's NOT because of slow pace but other exisiting demerits in modified version
Story starts at Chapter 25 for now. We're just waiting for Chapters 1-24 to be deleted. I'll continue to write until we can stock good chapters and revert them back to free. Thanks for your patience!
i have to be honest here at some point the OP has to stop most novels have 1 thing, either1. they get reincarnated and use knowledge of the future2. they are an extreme expert on top of thator 1. they reincarnate and use specific rewards to build the most solid foundation2. get a super OP system or talent on top of thatthis is all of it combineddont get me wrong i enjoy this novelbut at some point it has to stopnow is not that point
Just a disclaimer before everyone reads the novel and also a shameless 5 star review, because why not? Now let's take all of these aside and actually talk about the nitty-gritty of this review. I mean, I could not add any reasons as to why I gave my own novel a 5 star review, but it's better if there's a reason.The good things of this novel, or kinda? Still depends on your preferences in the end. But oh well, let's see.. Pros:t1. Dao of Sticc - Should I expound more on the greatness of the sticc? Yes, I shall expound. The greatness of the sticc lies on the fact that the upon looking at the sticc, everything suddenly doesn't matter anymore except the sticc. The sticc is da wae and it is everything. It's like weed but legal. ;) No FBI plz >.
author there is r 18 tag but there is no describing scene or the s#x skip, I hope you can fix this, I know overdoing is bad, here is solution to this every time he does the thing you describ it when new women .... , from time to time with previous women , balance everything, I am not writer, so I don't know good pace etc, overall this My recommendation.(I am at chapter 20) I don't know if you changed it.
An interesting book, but sometimes incomprehensible, what the author wanted to say by some kind of action. The characters are written well, but the world as a whole is incomprehensible, and there is no clearly expressed plot.
A great short novel. I enjoyed it. Thank you to the author for his work and good luck to you in other books!...............................................
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For New Reader,,,THEY DROOOOP THIS BOOOK,, SO NO CHAPTER COMIN,, i feel pitty to whoever buy advance chapter,, you got robbed baby????????????????????
By the same author who wrote The Strongest System and A Valiant Life. His novels are kind of repetitive but they are the only two I’ve ever binge read to the end.