The Development Of The Story Is Good I Can't Say I'm A Big Fan Of The Story But The Style Of Writing Is One Of The Best I've Read, While There Might Be Some Inspiration For The Book I Can Just Overlook It Due To How The I've Read Only The First Three Chapter's But I Do Love The Story And I Hope It would Gain The Recognition It Has, While I Hope The Author Continue To Finish This Novel.
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One of the best isekai genre novel in my opinion.There was no updates in a long long time, but a lot if people are still waiting for it (inclusing me).
I love the plot. Kudos to the author. You really described story well. How will the protagonist end up huh? Hey you ,yes you there. Grab this novel and give it a read. A worth reading novel it is!
Okay, this novel is good.Why is that?Warning: Tiny minora spoiler ahead. Read at your own risk.Let me clarify something first in today's novels regarding this genre. Whether they are Japanese, Chinese, or original ones, they have cliches. The repeating happenings that it has becomes predictable and boring. So boring that reading the synopsis or the first chapter will make you lose interest.This one, this novel is a fresh addition because it has new gaming aspects told in a storytelling that will bait people to voluntarily go to the deepest layer of 'the abyss', LOL.Writing Quality:Storytelling factors such as the dialogue and information given in between isn't lacking or excessive. The cliffhanger is really good especially that first chapter. As per the basic requirement every author must learn, "show, not tell
This is a masterpiece that should get chosen and continued as fast as possible so they wouldn't make us disappointed as what happened with 'the demon's menu' and 'calamity of tomorrow'
Translation quality is very good and consistent.Updates are frequent. Hopefully can upload more chapters per dayStory started out good but is abit questionable in the middle.Male mc is becoming less likeable but world is developed very well
read like 80 chapters and let met tell you it IS One of the worst novels(maybe the worst) that ever existed.No story just a tragic MC and his story how he loses every single **** he touches.like literally every single thing he touches have the worst endings possible.no cultivation flow just him working out **** to jump levels which is absurd and guess what that over confident son of a ***** just knows and accepts challenges that i will be this level by this day just becuz a certain day is going to come and i will use this particular **** and will become OP as **** only to go to new places and screw new people's lives.
So far this has been an excellent book to read, goin between each character an their problems/worries is great. Keeps me wondering what is next to happen to any of them.. love the book so far
It was an experience to say the least, one that left me empty due to the fact that I can no longer read more unless the corrupt system decides this was worth it ?. So many good stories passed up let’s stop the trend here please web novel ? .
The main character is horribly he uses the fact that he is a cultivator to ignore things he could easily solve saying that he is above mortal problems hopefully it changes in the future
A great read, one of the best novels here on WebNovel. The MC is not arrogant, doesn't act stupidly and plot armour isn't used as much in this novel. After a stressful day, you can use this novel to calm down, pacing is awesome as well.