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Honest review here! I actually enjoyed reading it ehehehhe~Well first, the writing is amazing, it's smooth and easy to follow :3 I like to imagine the scene happening as I read huehehehFor update stability, full stars since I know writing needs a lot of effort, and it's not that easy to always update everyday ehehehAnd about story, although some might complain that the pacing is slow, but well in my opinion, the daily life adds extra layers to the character. Like we can learn how they think and act that way, which I like. And even though it's not jam-packed with actions and what-not, we can still clearly see where the plot is going, so i kinda like it still :3For characters though, not much to say from meee, because I personally care more about the personality and how they act, compared to how they look. That being said, even though I prefer the side characters more because the MC is ahem, maybe spoiler-ish idk, pretty perverted. That's only my opinion, but in a way, that's good because it's more humane to have flaws, and flaws are characteristics, too. I look forward to seeing more flaws since right now he's being portrayed as a genius hard-worker who got the highest score and a good sum of money and a deep-thinker, while his flaw right now is just... Perversion? The thing that kinda made me wonder, though, is that sometimes the MC acts weird, but that's probably going to be explained later. Like how he was sooo desperate to chase after the thief because that game was extremely important to him, but then stopped to listen to the thief's story. I mean, sometimes people do that, but when you're at a risk of getting something extremely important to you, i think most people would just leave rather than risk getting sneak attacked or ambushed by the thief's friends, idk? Prolly I'm just being picky ahahaha--World background is pretty okay, it's a virtual reality game and it's exciting, but I think I still need to read more to fully understand it ehehehe since I haven't read too much, and so far I think it's just like, well, a VR game :3Great work, author~
Simply a masterpiece. The writing style is great. The chaotic mc and the dynamic between the characters is amazing. It got me hooked. It's just a real shame it's dropped.
No me gusta cuando el autor pone su personaje contra el personaje principal de la historia, porque no directamente hacerlo con el MC de esa historia y así puedes cambiar muchas cosas? Me caga que el MC se asuste por el otro mc
I love how they support each other,dumb husky is very childish...but shizun is an adult virgin...can't imagine how much they are in painI've read this up to ch 181
I have read the first 20 chapters in the trial read. I like this beginning novel very much. I hope this work gets selected and that more chapters are written. Everyone please vote for this one and Author please write more chapters. Thanks.
Bro i read alot and i can tell you the build up is unsatisfactory but since i have started reading your book, i will read it to the end Bro i read alot and i can tell you the build up is unsatisfactory but since i have started reading your book, i will read it to the end
Concept is good but the story is so slow that it becomes very irritating. .
This writer is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15. He's disgusting.
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It feels sour to read in everytime how low class swordman is, like come on, in other novels is a good class, even in real life is a first option for many, a fantasy, why use this element just to make the mc pityful and then when he is on high ground all to be "omg he is a swordman, the shittiest class but look at him he is so good, omg my idol / he is a swordman and is so good=1st tester so guys" RUUUN DONT PROVOKE HIM, HE IS GONMA KILL US ALL". Kind off meh