More updates. This is simply an excellent novel. It was a little bit early to be giving reviews but this novel is just wonderful. It deserves an oscar awards ?. Excellent
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This is actually a good story , MC was trying to be a scholar when he got drafted in the older time to fight against sparta he lost and is reincarnated later on to the world however now systems appeared and with them mana , I like it quite a lot was really good just a bit weird about how MC was son of strongest mage and was born with negative stats even if he's underfed he still ate a good amount after he was free and the stats stayed quite bad . Apart from that it's pretty good
I like this ? . :)
Raw?
Another novel with no raw so sad, only if there is someone that find raw he true someone heavenly defy.Great story but I feel like some part of story were bit too slow and some were too fast.
I've always been a fan of visceral violence/ horror mixed with fantasy elements and I feel that this novel delivers. I loved the grotesque details of the actions as well as the implications of the kind of the world this story takes place. While the writing can be good, even phenomenal at points, it can use a bit of polish in sentence structuring. There is also some repetition but not a lot to really hinder the experience.Overall, this is the kind of story that you want to read if you want to clean your palate from the usual fantasy story.
Not the best but definitely best than the one star of the guys who never read it.Źzzdjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjjrrjfjfjfjfjdjdjfjfjdjfjfjddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjd
I've been reading your books for a while now and I felt like this needed to be done.Jk, I was planning on doing this a while ago but never got to it, anyways, as I said before I've been following you for more than a year now, and I've watched as you developed your style and bettered your skills. Though, I wish you'd pick up your novel, the plundering demon: Mammon, I know your probably busy since your a high school student as well, and junk, and I'm satisfied with what I've read up here, but...Ok, maybe there's no but's in my head right now, though, from what I just read in the latest chapter, chap 173, things seem to be getting good, and it seems like your planning on doing something to connect the timelines by the way your list is set up, but I wanted to tell you not to strain yourself doing this, I read in your comment about what you said, and you really need to take your time before you end up hurting yourself. Thanks all I wanted to say now.Take care, and lots of love TurtleMaster?
It's actually pretty great and I stumbled upon this book a few days ago good luck on your story because it really has a lot of potential. I Love your work and really recommend it
It's a great novel that different from other.. i know the beginning is like MVS.. but everythink is like mvs nowadays tbh ahaha. Please give it a chance and you wont regret it. Plus i like the difference. For example mc is a cute and little brother type, it was my first time seeing a mc like this. Idk but it was quite refreshing for me.Author is a kind person, and always can chat with. There is a discord server. So dont forget to join there, we will be waiting~!Well, after reading my review until here, why are you still here and go read ahah~~!
I really enjoyed it. Hope you write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!