well the direction of the developing novel looks extraordinary with the focus on mc as GK, he has a lot of potential to become one of the best expecting more thrilling moments
Such a masterpiece....I will recommend this book to every novel aficionados cause this is really really good If you are into romance and cheesy genre then this might not be for you but this novel is love so you should give it a try cause I believe you’ll be hooked on this ❣️
the story at the beginning is really good, and interesting. The world building was decent and the mc is smart, and a little bit conniving. Everything is good until later on in the novel where then everything becomes kind of forced. Certain actions just don't make sense. one example of this is the character development of the mc from selfish loner(except his brother) to a somewhat caring and socialable guy. However, even with this change in personality he doesn't help others when it cost him nothing. like giving potatoes from his infinite potato shooter. I'm not saying that the mc should be a saint, but he actually gets benefits from doing this from the system which forces him to do good(sincere thanks helps him unlock OP weapons). The system itself just seem to stop working later on after the mc copy enough abilities and just doesn't trigger quests that much. Some situations are written in a forced way to make the mc act in a certain direction, which to me ruins the emersion of the novel. Even with these flaws I feel that this is a decent novel compared to others on this site, so check it out if you want.
This is most ****tiest novel i have ever read. Mc is ****, his character is ****, personality is ****.... just everything about him is ****. The story, world and character other than mc are all retards and i can't just help but hate them. Mc is hot headed and stupid and annoying. I don't know what drug author took while writing this but he shouldn't have. The way he portrays males and mc as this perverted **** and speaks as if all males are like him, the author only means himself or the other people that are his friends. Goddess woman and ice cold beauties and mc that thinks too much with his dick make this even more ****ty. Its so ****ty, one would need to invent a new word for this lvl of ****ty. Author, not all males are like you, salivating at woman in broad daylight. Its pathetic, both mc and the novel and the author. Good thing i didn't waste my time.
I went out of my way to write a full review for this story, because I felt like it had a lot of potential, decent plot idea, and the author can improve significantly.Writing Quality is a bit disappointing. "Show, don't tell" is a cornerstone of writing. There are lots of explanations for everything with info dumps, instead of a slow but steady discovery. Various descriptions are awkward many times as well. In addition, there are a number of typos. I honestly just expect more from a premium novel.Author updates regularly, which is great.Story development feels pretty basic. Nothing groundbreaking or new. There's a system. Someone has transmigrated. Theres a tournament arc. Etc. It doesn't pull me in because I feel like I've seen it all before. For a world that is being invaded, it doesn't feel like it at all. Everyone seems too casual about it all. Normal people just living their lives casually when the world is falling apart around them. We had a global pandemic where people were dying from covid, and things changed everywhere. I can't imagine monsters invading, and people just acting like martial arts are just "sports" anymore. You give little to no impression about how society has changed from this.Character design is a little boring. I wish that there was a little more character development. Everyone other than the MC feels a bit two dimensional. Even the MC sometimes feels a bit boring. I don't know how you plan to bring character growth to the MC either since he was already an adult, and he is doing the same thing he was doing in his previous life. There needs to be personal growth for the characters, otherwise you result in a Xianxia novel where everyone is rigid and unreasonable.World background also got 3 stars because there is nothing new about a world being invaded by monsters.
Lovable characters, so interesting ...️
Are you ever gonna start writing this book again?
more story of thea please
The story is meandering now.....something needs to give otherwise the story will become boring
Not like any other book I've read here. Excellent writing and the story is unpredicatble and compelling.
Al and Kia are goals to be honest ٩(♡ε♡ )۶
Can Xavier be any dumber?! ALWAYS misunderstanding things and can’t reason with zivon!! story just keeps repeating with nothing of value progressing. After >1030 chapters, he still doesn’t know about his daughter and she wants true love?! So messed up and annoying to read… not worth it… I quit!!