ItsPraveen
I like what the story has so far. I like the power system its vety unique. And the world it self seems fantastical. I like the old man. This story has potential but i do feel like things are moving very far. Maybe pace it better
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Once I started reading, I didn't want to stop! The descriptions are so detailed that you feel as though you are in the story and can see and feel the surroundings. There are so many fascinating characters, but my favorite is Solaris. He makes my heart smile, you have compassion for him, and want to know what knowledge he has, but he is unable to say just yet, and it is intriguing ..
Grabs your attention from the start and keeps you interested in how everything turns out. Looking forward to seeing how allnthe characters and story develops.
The story had great potential, and I appreciated the detailed world-building. However, some characters felt a bit one-dimensional, and the pacing was uneven in parts. Still, it was an entertaining read with some memorable moments
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I’m really enjoying the story! I like the fights and cool powers!
With an intriguing plot, interesting characters and immersive scenes, this book is a gem! Looking forward to read more! Author, please update soon!
It a good story till now. The world background is confusing till now but still, it is interesting, I think the author is deliberating doing this. But it is annoying.
It's a great story.
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great story plot and character now I'm just waiting for the next episode to drop hope it comes soon . translator or writer just keep doing you it's a great story so far
