spearDem0N
great novel author...it has so much potential and your writing is good...make mc more cruel and smart
Hope the translator continue translating this one. There's already 3300+ available in the websites and it was so good but takes a long time to release.
i really liked this story until chapter 115. the author starts focusing on random people for a few chapters then goes into info-dump mode for a few chapters then bounces back and forth, 1 decent chapter then 2 more info chapters. it's one overwhelming and two super boring. imma try to keep going but im not trying to buy info dump chapters. author should have worked the info into the story progression better, instead of just going info crazy.
an intriguing tale of modern world meeting the occult.
A truly great book, absolutely not to be missed. My friend, you deserve this praise. Everything is so perfect, it reminds me of the emotions I felt when I first started reading novels. It's simply wonderful.
overall it's a pretty good manga, I'd recommend anyone who likes reading light novels to read this. it's got potential to be a good anime one day
Good story line start reading it today anf progress is good
Cerita sangat bagus dan sangat memuaskan. Membayangkan ada dunia seperti itu di dunia nyata . Bahwa multi alam semesta itu ada dan nyata . Suatu hari manusia bisa menjelelajahi alam semesta
writing quality: If not for a few strange sentences here and there that don't really make sense as they are or have a logical issue, i would give this 6 stars. that's not possible, but i still want to express how much i like the way it's written. it feels just as immersive as the many books on my shelf. it also really fits the overall mood and world.story development: i haven't reached very far, but it heavily reminds me of plenty of royal romance face slapping webtoons, only that there's no romance, but honestly, i don't even miss it! reading it is simply satisfying.character design: i can't complain much. The characters are unique, and there isn't an overload of useless characters, meaning each introduced character has a clear role and is easily distinguished. the reason i only gave 4 stars here is that they aren't described much, which makes it a bit hard to be sure what they're supposed to look like.updating stability: I have no clue as i haven't caught up yet. Enjoy the free 5 stars, author!world background: i love the vibes, and i love the setting. it's not anything no one else has thought of before, but there's a healthy amount of "unusual" combinations, which, in turn, make it feel fresh and lift it from the masses.personal notes: If you want to see the protagonist fight and struggle, this novel isn't for you. the hardships already happened, so he's now on a face slapping spree, easily making all the villains miserable and coughing up blood (not quite so dramatic in the novel, that's just me). but if you like that, go for this novel!
One of, if not the best novels I have read in a while. If you are looking for nitty gritty revenge where mc gets pure strength then this is your book. There is a lot more I want to compliment the author on, however I have the attention span of a hamster and instead of studying for my finals I binge read this nonstop.
This story has a lot of potential but i’ve found there are a few things that somewhat squander it. The ‘system’ has been extremely annoying and controlling so far, and i get there’s some buildup for a twist or something but im 50 chapters in and almost every single instance of growth feels almost useless within sometimes less than a chapter; it feels extremely unsatisfying to follow the main character. I can see there are a bunch of threads being laid out for some big reveals later down the line, but i’m personally not looking forward to them because every single ‘big reveal’ so far has not felt like it matters that much. I still rated this 4 stars because I think everything besides character design and some of the story development is phenomenal.
I read though this story all the way to the current chapter in two days. It is amazing.Writing Quality - 4.7 starsStability of Updates - 5 starsStory Development - 5 starsCharacter Design - 5 starsWorld Background - 5 starsI read the story on reddit and came here to review it.
