Freespiritknight
hehe, why am I reviewing my own work.
wait come to think of it , actually it's not bad to review our work by myself
well ,i feel soo much good to write this ><
It's fine. Not super amazing, but not horrible either. It's non offensive. MC has no particular personality but is also not brain dead . The supporting cast.... Exists. But it also hasn't got any presence. The bar is very low, and it manages pass it
the futuristic earth and the Sean that is soldier wow it was good I like the novel . story progressing was good and the world building it was excellent I will love to read it upcoming chapter keep up that good work
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If you keep reading, the story will continue to be interesting that cannot be understood in one or two chapters, the ahead you read, the more interesting the story will be. In many places, I found unnecessary capitalization, along with many spelling mistakes that I pointed out.But your dialogue is good. Even in many places, you have chosen the word very well. I had fun reading, keep it up.
The story was amazing. I like the bonding of the princess and the dragon very much. Your plot is extraordinary Awesome. Keep up the hard work, author. Your work has impressed me.
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Not counting the complete lack of originality, It began with some hopeful details. But it quickly derailed in a cheesy melodrama with nonsense classic and overused webnovel plot devices.tltr: Reading this is a waste of time.
this is an interesting plot please release this novel as soon as possible if you cannot realease this novel this time then please consider this novel as top priority for next realease
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I've been hoping for a long while that the author will pick this back up. they had clearly put effort into it and it was quite a good read .
