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So far good and It's your first novel. I guess you're trying to maintain the hero mysterious that's why everywhere hero is always mentioned as 'he'. But i think i got the reason in chapter 10. About hindu god's inclusion I'm not sure and it's my first time reading a novel such as this. Guess I'll find out as the story progresses. Your world is also a little unique and also seems vast since it's a fantasy world with magic as mages levels are introduced, it also has monsters, god's and kingdoms as you mentioned. Keep going i feel this has great potential. Hope you update more frequently.
A fantastic start to an amazing novel with unimaginable potential! The MC is incredibly cool and smart, and the author does an excellent job with descriptions, making me feel like I’m part of the story. I highly recommend this to all FL fans, and I know I’ll be supporting this story wholeheartedly!
I'm sorry but the early chapters are in dire need of a rewrite. The quality is awful, the descriptions are simple, no punctuation, and grammar mistakes everywere. Reading ahead, the quality gets better. But as it stands, the early parts are way too painful to read.
**Review up to chapter 290**Is the novel worth it? It definitely is, it has high quality ‘Plot’ combined with many interesting characters that tickle all the kinks… The power system is quite fun and I like how it somehow blends perfectly into a modern fantasy world without breaking the feel of it(‘ A dude that’s committed to building his harem by just cruising thru life’). You won’t get bored reading and another huge plus for me is that it looks we are in for the long run.**SPOILER, maybe?**I do have some advice to elevate the novel before it goes to the point of no return… I feel that with the last ~70 chapters the novel derailed a bit from the actual plot compared to the beginning. It’s sort of heading into short ‘stories’ around 1 heroine at a time instead of that seamless flow of events that it had, not like it’s a bad thing since there are many heroines to address(rather I liked it very much… cough) but to keep things fresh and entertaining a proper timeline of events is better. It would make the novel move at a slower pace but I think it’s necessary so that some heroines won’t be left out. Ultimately my advice is to pace the plot better and not rush things too much, I’m not talking about the events around the heroines but more like the events in between.***Anyways, good job Author! I’m excited for what’s to comeThe novel is definitely a hidden gem ✅ 9/10
Even at reading the 7th chapter, I know it's a good one. I'd hoped we'd get the sequel to Alanor but now it's happening and I'm so excited.
"Its makes sense," said Mamat.
"Naruto right?"
I sometimes feel alittle hazy,
-sometime in the Soul Society-
Geez i whish time would pass faster or at least have the Pure Heavenly Posion finish gathering enrgy so i can change my form in there to an adult with the GM abilite so i can get more done *sigh* being a baby sucks its soo boring.
"Aaaaahh I forgot I haven't taken a bath yet... gotta go *speeds away*"