Great story and concepts fOr and interesting world. The definition of an overpowering main character but it is fun Vote for this to get picked
I really wanted to like this book, love the premise but it's all over the place and borderline unreadable. A lot of it is disjointed, doesn't make sense and has issue with grammar.
The novel itself is very good, but there are issues. Spelling and grammatical errors are within every chapter. The flow of the chapters are either stagnant or rushed with not much in between. The book is only averaging around 3 updates a week, but has a 50 chapter privelage system that since the author doesnt update every day wont ever be rewarded. There are lots of good and lots of bad. Neither outweigh the other.
This book is fucking terrible. Literally getting ****ed over everywhere he goes. He and the few people who are trying to do good know who the Bad guys are but do nothing and just let them **** **** up. Bad guys live good guys die. Dumb fucking book
Atleast this novel the author decided to make a novel less dramatic compared to IRTD im very happy for making this ero comedy novel and I wish you dont give bad ending to your novel because I will feel bad for my SS hahahaha. Anyways keep up the good work :D
Why doesn't Long Hochen become the God of Creation at the end of the series? The useless veritable Tang Jia San Shao know that the Throne of Seal story line is boring
Great novel, as expected of the later IET works. There are good emotional moments, the actions are sensible and consistent, and the characters feel real.
Nice chill novel.. nice concept.. plot is also fine so farI just hope the mc can have more character in him rather than being a block of wood.. more of his emotions.. more of his thought process.. than just him being totally rational to the point that it seems like there's nothing wrong with it.. but nothing awesome about it.. just normalI hope the story can make me feel more involved rather than making me feel detached to it and feel like watching a perfect side story going on.
Yeah it seems good so far I recommend Filler song again……Gunter, why did you gunt my fries?I gunted them, and they were mine.What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?Gunter, there were tears there.If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
Among all medic webnovels I have read, this is somewhat averageThe system is good. It doesn’t parachute mastery of skills in his mind. Which is nice after all the overpowered systemsThe problem is the MC. His diagnostic levels are low yet he is diagnosing patients better than the the attending and chiefs all the time. Since the system says you are low levelled then you can’t simply have him be a Sherlock Holmes level genius simply to do some face slapping. Let him build some character first. I was easily willing to read some common low level doctor-patient incidents first which would help MC get some creditability and then jump to higher standards but this one face slaps the chief of departments inside 60 chaptersThe rest is okay. Some familiar tropes like those who study abroad cannot be as good as the one locally. Some nationality sprinkled here and there. Worth a read if you got nothing else
Writing Quality is good, there are little to no errors, some sentences were rough but still acceptable, how you describe something is a little bit lacking. Stability of Uodates is not consistent enough. Story Development is too fast paced. In Chapter 1 things happened too quickly, and there are some keypoints missing like, but since it's only starting, I guess it will be explained on the next chapters(If it will have) Character Design is acceptable. It lacks description on how the MC looks and what his personality is.World Background is also good, so no complaints there.
Bro I like this..the fluff and purpose of the MC and the godlike MC are all dope...all I ask is that you build the romance...keep it happy and fluff no angsty tragic ****...no perverted issei type idiotic MC or wife stealing....its just sad..also the harem..dont make it stupid like 15 or 20//////....keep it small..also bash characters,....anyway goodluck and goodshow