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This is a very good Translation Novel .I like this so much.One of my favorite novels. I love this so much and I love the translator of this novel.
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It's great but could use work on the main character. Loved all of the novel except the main character. He's meant to be some genius mage who is immortal... but he talks like a plain teenager and he doesn't seem very intelligent? He's meant to have the title of Sage but he's not inquisitive? The closest to wanting to learn new things he gets is just being interested in cultivation. Which, that part of him being interested in cultivation seems quite forced. It should be more smooth and gradually interested in cultivation. Instead, he's foregoing all magic immediately to learn about something he read in a book once pretty much.
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It's not bad, but it's not good either. Honestly, it's not that enjoying to read and kinda becomes of a chore coz there's something off that I can't point out. Like it feels the story is kinda stiff. The world background is also kinda weird since it feels like Korean, with Western and other Asian vibes. I wouldn't usually mind this but it needs proper development, or maybe it's just a translation problem if ever. I don't know what's the plan with the "System" but if it's only for the so-called psuedo-omnipotent "Guidance
Surprisingly Very Good.I went in with low expectations because it was a simulator novel, but the twist that the Empress and MC share the simulator (explained in Second Chapter) makes it quite unique from the rest of these types. The potential plot developments that could arise from other twists (which I won’t spoil) also set this apart from similar stories. The MC actually has a decent brain (can’t say the same for the Empress) and he appears to be competent in kingdom building/management. I really hope that if this does devolve into a harem novel, that the empresses are at least well-fleshed out. As of Ch 19, we’ve gotten very little development from the Empress, however chronologically it’s only been a few days; there are plenty of opportunities to do so. The translation is great: no pronoun errors, no choppy/convoluted messes, and no name switching. While there is no overarching goal/antagonist to overcome, there is so much potential here that I have to give this novel a 5. Such a fresh take (as of Ch 19) on a bland, oversaturated genre.
Wow This book is too great and can't be ignored.The writing quality is soo awesome that it hoks yiu and you barely can leave it.The story is too interesting, action and strong that it burns you to read on just by looking at the book cover.Loved the plot.Good luck author