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invisible dragon:then i'm starting! colbob! its the end for you mwahahahaha!
god and demon kings:huh now you mention it i cant see can you?
Too much time skip and battles are not detailed or the mechs. The imagery is weak, and half the time I don't even know where I am in the novel as well; it's too fast and the strength mc gains is so insignificant because of that. This is the first time I ever did a review, and I did this review because the novel's story is pretty crap. Character (especially Mu Shang)and world design are alright though.
Wait. Why did they stop updating this Novel??? ??I wanted to try this out but i saw that it doesnt update anymore ☹️Why? Why?I wanted to wait until it has 100 Chappy so i could bulk read it, but it just stopped updating. Is it on Hiatus? Or did they drop this?
Have read to chapter 154. Story so far has been great and exciting. Maybe reduce the amount of time and perspective shifts per chapter. Been noticing it too much from chapter 100 and beyond. Characters. The MC is too naive, but that is acceptable. The supporting casts have their own quirks that are fun. However, the female lead is UNBARABLE. She was fine in the beginning, but then EVERTHING ABOUT HER CAN BE DESCRIBED AS A FEMALE CAT IN HEAT. This STUPID high school romance is horrible this story. Every mention of her is just "Oh, I...I love him... but.... I don't know what to say...GRRRR STAY AWAY FROM MY MAN (they aren't dating)." She legit says, "You promised me your decisions would be at my mercy, Elio. (MC) Have you already forgotten?" The MC probably made this STUPID promise when he was 8, and WHO WOULD TAKE THIS PROMISE SERIOUSLY? SHE DOES, AND SHE GETS MADE WHEN THE MC DOESN'T WANT TO BE HER SLAVE BASICALLY. MC is dealing with the survival of EVERYONE, while she just wants a train ran. Overall, great story. Throw that TRASH female lead off the wall.
An immersive experience for all ages. My endless hunger for quality content has been duely sated. The gods of XP have bestowed upon us this beautiful literary gift, which shall become a classic, and a testament to humanity's will and achievements.
it's good..............................
I absolutely love the Mc's character design. So far also love the two lovers of hers as well. Her family is sweet as well and love Diamond to pieces.
Be warned the name is deceiving it not selfish lunatic instead it is selfless lunatic he gives his things freely and trusts others easily and has no great ambition and the story only revolves around one city. Just a waste of time
Awesome plotline. Your idea of making the kali (Antagonist) believe in himself that he is the prophesized savior when he is supposed to be the prophesized evil and destroyer of world, is making me hopeful for the story. Keep it up.
hey man I have read such a good story in a very long timeI hope you can publish more of it. And never stop.It has such a great potential