The story is very very good but there are too many characters. Can't remember their names. Plot is amazing and even mysterious. Can't even wait to know what happens ahead. This story is so interest grabbing that one can't leave it..Thank you.
The story is well written. I'd encourage the author to find a more succinct way of showing the system feedback as it currently takes up 25% of a chapter (sure would be nice if inkstone supported tables). I don't feel we know enough about the characters yet as most of the characters, aside from MC were given some background and then left to simmer, but it's still early on in the story. Overall, well done for the first 17 chapters :)
The book has the potential. When reading i found not much miatakes but its like no description of Igor and Massie which should have been in the First chapter. I love it by the way....
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Since last novel got bummed imma copy my last one here.Note: THE AUTHOR WILL TRY TO LOWER UR EXPECTATIONS OF THE STORY BUT IT IS A FUCKIN.G GEM. Writing quality- I didn't see any problems with it, it seemed to flow when i was reading. Stability of updates- It's every day so it's great but it could become better if he released like 3 a day(jk) the story is so good u want more updates. Story Development-Fuckin.g 10/10 it isnt slow paced but its at a rate where that it feels like the events are flowing like flipping to the next page. Character design- All the characters in the book are actual ppl with personalities and reasons to do things not like he's evil so kill him but it explains why he/she is evil or commits acts that warrant the label evil put on it. World background- Simple words for u, there is no info dump but small bits that u can start putting together in ur head while reading. I HIGHLY recommend it. It's also from the first POV and sometimes changes POV so we can know what the other characters are doing.
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Valla mierda el MC si sabes que no vas a ganar no vallas y déjalo a tu amigo y no hagas el ridiculizado o al menos gana una hdp aquí lo dejo solo por eso
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New in my journey but I also like your work so far. Keep at it and try Improving you go along through the process. I will continue reading and give my feedback as I read.
I made the mistake of reading this story here. Google 'sign in Buddha's palm' and read it on another site like fox.The translations here are garbage compared to that site. I had to re-read 40 chapters because of this. Don't waste your time like I did and avoid this story on this site and find it on foxaholic.
It's a pity to see that even a garbage level novel here can get an average rating of 4.7 stars. May be these Chinese readers would become diehard fans if they ever got to read a proper novel with all the required ingredients (ofcourse they should be able to keep aside their racist prejudice before that ).
DAMN IT this book has been dropped from webnovel no new updates for notebook of fortune unless someone here who likes the novel has a way to convince them to start working on it again we are out of luck