Next morning, Guin wokes up seeing the system messages pop up one after another.
"Jennifer's a beau~tiful one." (Melissa)
"Sounds like a Genjutu," Sasuke said darkly. "It sounds like they're close."
This is an amazing story! One word: captivating!!! They say the reviews shouldn’t be less than 140 words but I can just wait to get back to the story and finish it Amazing story Kudos to the Author
Just reading up until chapter 40 and I'm immediately hook and left craving for more! Thanks for popping out like a mushroom and gave us this wonderful story! Good luck and thanks for all of your hard work! ??
The story was great. But the author doesn't give a damn and just ended everything in one chapter.No conclusion. Nothing about the main invading zerg. His godfather aftermath and his loyal follower charcoal are still unknown.His milf teacher status is unknown. The Templars are unknown. How does his pet blue repopulate is unknown. where do the immortals go? Did they succeed in getting rid of the parasites?Where does the transcendence go? If they are gods then where is Li Feng?And that hidden gate at templar of prophecies is just crap which everything didn't come true.The fight is exciting and the struggle feels legit. But this half baked ending with mc happily ever after with his harem with no conclusion and no answers is just disappointing.
MAN! This book is seriously amazing, I have felt different emotions from the first to the current chapter. I highly approve and reccomend and the male lead ??the male lead!! ??One funny whipped man !Check it out! shout out to the author for a beautiful masterpiece
I really enjoyed it so far, up to about chapter 110. the main character is very ruthless but is kind to his love ones. sometimes I feel the love part is a bit off, like placement wise and perhaps spammed too much. Also he became brothers with someone in 1 day, and kinda let himself be used and dragged into a nobles fight. I can just see how the pointless fight will lead to them be tracked down by his mother's family. I wish it didn't have to be so obvious. maybe they could have changed there names at the very least and wore disguises.I highly recommend the book and feel at has good potential. I am looking forward to the next story arc.
Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll meI ain't the sharpest tool in the shedShe was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumbIn the shape of an "L" on her foreheadWell the years start coming and they don't stop comingFed to the rules and I hit the ground runningDidn't make sense not to live for funYour brain gets smart but your head gets dumbSo much to do, so much to seeSo what's wrong with taking the back streets?You'll never know if you don't goYou'll never shine if you don't glowHey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go playHey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paidAnd all that glitters is goldOnly shooting stars break the moldIt's a cool place and they say it gets colderYou're bundled up now, wait till you get olderBut the meteor men beg to differJudging by the hole in the satellite pictureThe ice we skate is getting pretty thinThe water's getting warm so you might as well swimMy world's on fire, how about yours?That's the way I like it and I never get boredHey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go playHey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paidAll that glitters is goldOnly shooting stars break the moldHey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go playHey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paidAnd all that glitters is goldOnly shooting starsSomebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?I need to get myself away from this placeI said yep what a conceptI could use a little fuel myselfAnd we could all use a little changeWell, the years start coming and they don't stop comingFed to the rules and I hit the ground runningDidn't make sense not to live for funYour brain gets smart but your head gets dumbSo much to do, so much to seeSo what's wrong with taking the back streets?You'll never know if you don't go (go!)You'll never shine if you don't glowHey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go playHey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paidAnd all that glitters is goldOnly shooting stars break the moldAnd all that glitters is goldOnly shooting stars break the mold
?? this is so sad what about her made the zombie only want to rape her and on top of that why did guy kidnap her . Wth didnt girl unlock her faster n just sat there watching.
It has some good promise, and it has a nice twist on the cliche of a system making the mc op. Mainly just needs to work on making the chapters updates more reliably frequent.
I am here to show to my support. Keep working hard. I recommend it.