yo author this novel is really great I hope you update at daily .........................,.....................................................
I know that there are many veterans in historical novels, and I say that I am among the first of them. I used to follow all the Arab, Chinese, and even Western historical novels, but there are many novels that are beautiful in their presentation until they reach nationalism, and they begin to criticize people and people, and this is bad because they look from the non-historical side. There are many. Of the reasons for past actions, do not look only from the point of view of one report. You must read at least 3 reports, and I will see this wonder, and then I will evaluate...
This was the first time I've cried while reading a book (during Twain' and Demi's retirement). The author is obviously a very big fan of football and does extensive research so props to them.
There are good aspects of this novel and then there are bad as well, though the bad will start to heavily tilt the balance of the scale after a few hundred chapters. The writing quality and/ or translation is the highlight of this novel, the author has taken the time to pack in information, as well as constant world building into the story in addition to the lengthy chapters. The author is also a little more creative with the cultivation system and while, it does not venture off too much from your typical system, the author is more in-depth with explanations as well as giving each minor realm its own unique, innovative touch. Each minor realm of the cultivation system has a reason to exist and slowly, but surely builds a logical foundation over time that ties into the power the cultivation system grants each character. There are also unique elements to the story that I find creative and fun, such as the various side characters that are parodies of your typical Xiaxia protagonist or the constant countdown towards the MC's doom that pushes his cultivation vs. the typical "I want power over my own fate" trope. If I had to summarize the bad, it would have to be that the novel is directionless, slow pacing and in relation to that, too much filler. The author has, without a doubt, thought out their power system. After that though, is where the novel loses a lot of readers because it gives the feeling that the author had a great idea for the power system but didn't have much in terms of story and plotting, constructing a weak and mediocre story around a solid foundation. There is too much filler and you end up reading thick, convoluted chapters that does not push the needle forward much in the grand scheme of things, spending upward of 30 to 50 chapters to stretch stuff out. There is not much progress with the MC in terms of cultivation and while the beginning of the novel makes you believe that you know what kind of character he is, he will then later mellow out and become quite generic and quite frankly, cowardly. I would argue that this novel is more about the MC building up a faction + kingdom building in all honesty, which isn't something I was expecting this novel to turn into if you were to compare the beginning of the novel to now.
when will the second part will be updated?.....................The Novel is great...........................................................
the ending was terrible. It's like author slapped something on paper to get it over with.
very interesting.. i enjoy reading this book..thanks...
Recommended!
its nice i like it this is my favorites
I can’t stop reading, and I’m looking forward to the ending
Too much violence I this story...it reminds me of Still Loving you
interesting