I like how the story develops but the lack of chapters is saddening. I will keep supporting it though just to make the author update more chapters.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fsacinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
Hey im new hereI haven't even read the book but I know it will be interestingKeep the good job rolling authorUpdate daily also??????????????
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Everything is good in this novel except the the mc, he is your typical cultivator mc that might be brain dead.
10/10
Não sei oq dizer, história muito boa ein galera br
so vai
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113 chapters in & I'm enjoying this story very much. The attention to detail while also not resorting to infodumps is refreshing. Eager to see where the story leads.
I really quite like this novel. It doesn't take itself entirely seriously, and the system he has allows for the author to get him into contrived and funny scenes that bely common sense (because the system has none). So far it's developed quite well, and fleshes out the world background so that you have a good picture of the past, present, and a hazy view of the future. It's fairly exciting, with battle-scenes that aren't just "He punched him, he fell over" sort of style, and has a decent dialogue along with extreme characters with interesting behaviours and viewpoints.
I’m only on chapter 12, but….. this book has been and looks like it will be the book that I have been waiting for. Years have gone by and this is basically the book that I have been hoping and dreaming would one day be written. I love it. I’ll write another review later on the actual writing and how the book ends up but I had to put this out there with how excited I was
Just a fun read nothing too serious just some naughty fun
Currently at ch.20 and I’m loving the story so far! Im going to beng read the rest of the chapters and wait for more to come! ❤️