I got to chapter 10 before i decided to drop this, when we start the story we get your basic intro to the mc (i transmigrated, here is my system which won't wake up for 6 more months, i specialize in history so i know what will happen, and somehow i went from a penny less bum to owning an inn on a corner street in the capital) this was all pretty much chapter 1 after that we meet Charles (the king in disguise) who asks about the situation of a war going on in another country and the kings chances of winning if he participated in the war, to this the mc described the snow storm going on in the enemies territory and a drought unknown to the king going on in our territory....... Now here is where my low score comes into play, the above took like two chapters, we then spend the next EIGHT talking about how amazing the mc is (and only find out in chapter 8 or 9 that the mc did NOT transmigrate but instead traveled too the past which is how he knew the weather, although why he would memorize the weather from most likely centurys past i have no idea) so in essence we have 8 chapters of identifying that the mc is amazing plus needing to cover up a plot hole of how the mc would know the weather in two separate parts of the continent
it has a promising start, hope you continue it. Please update more chapters. Looking forward to what's next.more more more more more more more more
The cover 5/5The synopsis 5/5The writing? It was amazingly written and it surprised me that Webnovel has such quality writer. This is a hidden gem and I discovered it. Give me a medal and reward please.
Great story so far. I really like Shade's character, his qualities are unique to say the least. His suspicion towards people might actually be a good thing in this survival game. Can't wait to see what happens inside his mind as he goes on playing for his life.The writing quality well... I didn't expect such clean pages from a writer here in this site. There are some paragraphs where active voice could be used to reduce the word redundancy, but that's just me nitpicking. The reader can expect a smooth read without being interrupted by errors.Story is unfolding through a third point of view. I have no complaints about the pacing of the book as well. I can't really say anything about the world building yet but this novel has the potential to keep a reader hooked. The author has smartly used the trending elements here (death game, unsocial mc, game world, etc). However, I believe the author will make a difference which hundreds of other writers fail at doing.
A fantastic book. Staring from world building, story development and character design. everything has done perfectly. its hard to believe that this is author's first book. When I started to read it give so many different ideas about world building and charactor design. as a reader i like tha book very much and as author i like it even more. im definitely following story and i wish there were more chap. well done author
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2 novels in this group are really good, lets hope that it list 1 of then will be pick up, the 2nd novel that in my opinion is even better than this one, and the best in this group of novel is : "Starting From Fooling the Elderly into Registering for a Cultivation Training Class" , lets hope thet 1 of them will be pick up. :)
Different but good cultivation novel. Interesting to read and a pretty stable release rate. All in all a good novel :)ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
honestly not good. so many mistakes of gender and word usage. the mc is incredibly boring with no personality and nothing is ever gone into detail in this book
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A decently well written and translated novel that has been hurt by the new premium system. I dont know how you can keep a super fast releases tag when all of those releases are premium only, with the none of those chapters pushing the free chapters along, leading to stagnant reading to everyone who isnt premium. I wouldnt mind the system if it coexisted with the ads, or it was actually possible to afford a single novel with natural spirit stones, but it isnt, and so i have to be harsher.
i like this book even though the genre isn't my taste. The author had done a great job to make me want to know more and read it. so I hope the author will keep writing