He had felt so worried for her, the sensation had been even worse than that time with the wolves. So much so that the world around him had ceased to exist. Back then, he was already there so he knew what was happening, he had been away for just a second, this time, he had no clue what was happening before he stepped in her room. With the immediate danger removed, the world around him started to move again. The lights came back up in his mind and his blood slowed down, almost feeling as if it flowed in reverse for an instant.
The next day, Hinata showed up at the training ground poking her fingers with her head down, waiting for Naruto and me. Of course, it seems that she did her best to keep herself from passing out immediately when she saw Naruto as she looked up, but it might take some time for her to get used to it. It seems I will have to 'train' her in a different way. Mwahahah - *cough* *cough* I didn't mean THAT way, you dirty peeps.
Walking through the gate, Will started going over things in his head as he decided to walk aimlessly as he thought.
It's just average. The story concept isn't original, I read a lot of similar stories with this setup. MC is a go with the flow guy, he's alright. The cheat and background and all that aren't explained, the author acts as if he explained it, but nothing is properly explained. Is it a bowl? a system? what abilities? how does MC know how to create gu? World building is non-existent. Characters are superficial. You won't see any depth in this story. Pacing is horrendous, it's so slow, the author pads words and fills a waste of space paragraphs. Repeated descriptions are a lot. Just felt like I read a lot but I gained nothing. If author focused on producing quality work instead of padding words and filling word count, I might have been interested in continuing to read even if it's a shallow story.
MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick MC sick
a perfect story telling ,the story building is so attractive
Just started reading and I love the book already. Keep up the good work author????
I really love this novel it's very entertaining and I like how the mc is op and the world background is very interesting. And hopefully though i can vote for the golden ticket I can't seem to vote for the golden ticket only power stones.
i like this story with the plot who make the reader suprise
unique style well development of characters have enjoyed the reading so far . An interesting view of morals waiting for the advancement of characters.
The story is exceptional engrossing to the point that I waste way too much money lol but it was so addicting I couldn’t put it down. The only gripe I have is the grammar but nonetheless, the novel was awesome from the first chapter to the last.
Great story, the plot constantly gets better and more interesting each day. The main character has Trials like expected in life. the cultivation is as we often wish it could be in our lives, adding adventure with survival . Well done .