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Read it through 240 chapter, finally feels it was good chapter to give it early review. +the worldbuilding 9/10 : nicely explained throughout the the story and no unnecessary info dumps. +the supporting character 7/10 : most of them was very well introduced and some of them still carry aura of mystery to them.+the main character 6/10 : the mc (Vicente) was a neutral evil guy, he is ruthless to his enemy and caring toward his family. but he's character was sometimes feels bland like something is missing. +the plot progression 8/10 : nicely paced not too fast and not too slow but some of the subplot was really unnecessMy only gripe was in where mc and his group went to Pentagram hunting in the forest and they found the guys from magic academy who was attacked by beasts and decided to help them. no problem until this point although i prefer to let them die. but after this and up until the DEAL that he made with guy named joshua (chapter 293-240) because of pentagram that not even his was single the most idiotic and dumb deal that can be avoided. it makes me rethink all of his decision up to this point.
What shamelessness! An author reviewing his own work? —some reader probably. Well, this may be a biased review but I hope you stick with me on this one. This book is a spirit contestant in the virtual reality section... and what better way to depict virtual reality than showing something that we humans know and have?!That's right, dreams... lucid dreams.A dream where you can bend the wills of reality and you can be whatever you want. That's what a lucid dream is. If you have experienced it, then you're one of the chosen ones! I'm kidding ahaha. I remember, the first thing I did when I had a lucid dream was master the ability of flight and remodeled the world by filling it with zombies and having a fight to the death with them. What are your lucid dream experiences? Share them in the comments and I'll gladly talk about lucid dreams with you hehe :) This book is a representation of my wish to the future. I know that games are advancing too much these days we typically already have the means to have a VRMMORPG, but accessing lucid dreams is still a far-fetched idea. However! That' what novels are for, and that's why I'm writing this book where everything can be a reality— in your lucid dreams of course. To explain the concept, here are some pointers.— Character building at the first few chapters so no catchy fight scenes yet— It may be confusing and may seem like a mishmash of genres but they all vortex to a single point in the story. In other words, everything in this book is connected so there will be no plot holes left unturned.— Backstories wouldn't be shown just yet! — And the last selling point... IT'S LUCID DREAMS! Who doesn't want that? And that's all for my shameless review. I hope you give this novel a try and I hope you enjoy your stay in the Lucid Dream Server :)
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Aaaaahhhhh. I’m in love with this book It draws you in and then you’re trapped (in a good way) the characters honestly could be stand-alone because you are able to know what they are like just from the book description and you don’t need to rely on outside knowledge. At one point I was crying with the characters because I felt the pain that she was going through I felt the sorrow. Aaaaahhhhhhh so good would recommend!!!!!
This novel was interesting until chapter 19. We have a cautious, steady, paranoid protagonist. Why is he like this? Because unlike other players...if he dies in the game - it's all over. He will die for real. So of course he'll be afraid of being hurt (let alone the prospect of death).And then it happened. From chapter 20 this novel became a [audience] reaction novel. Protagonist spends 10 chapters messing around with artefact upgrading gacha, and random audience react to it. I thought after 10 chapters of suffering the novel will finally move on...but no! Instead, there's even more filler as the author introduces a random character just so he can talk more about artefacts some more! This level of filler is absolutely crazy. In the first 40 chapters, 50% is worthless filler. It's too much.
Excellent start, hooks you straight into the story. Awesome character design and very interesting setting. Definitely a must read for wpc 242!
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it's interesting. the novel is a kind of eastern fantasy and western elements but really entertaining. I can recommend it for new readers looking for a new book to read.
fantastic storyline.praise worthy work!absolute page turner.not the typical drama ? story which we most often read.great work dear author.I absolutely love your work. ?MUST READ ???