LordSleepless
The chapters haven't been rewritten despite the plot being full of holes, mc being a complete idiot because of someone is the opposite gender, very inconsistent mc. Overall this is rated way too high, a three star at most due to it being written well with no or not many grammatical errors. It might be better in later chapters but that doesn't matter if you can't stomach the earlier ones which are painful to read.
What is with this batch of trail reads? This is a very short read 400 or so chapters total? That's barely a few months worth or reading! There is also a novel that's up for selection that is only 200 or something chapters and has been on hiatus for god knows how long.
The characters are developing nicely and the world is also slowly changing but not to fast. Soon spelling or grammar errors but over all it’s a good read.
The sentences are poorly written. First, it give me headaches trying to understand the words used. Second, the story becomes even harder to understand. Lastly, the words messed up are just terrible.
WHEN R U COMING BACK TO KEEP WRITING???? THIS BOOK I GREAT AND I LOVE IT!!!! PLEASE COME BACK AND START WRITING AGAIN!!!!!
Nice! It got picked. But... Where are the chapters?? We need a mass release of 100 chap to celebrate that it got chosen ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Great novel only hampered by the lack of updates this last half a year. A holy necromancer etc etc etc fill the word count etcetcetcetcetcetc
Looks like a fresh new take and fun story about reincarnated mc. The beginning already looks intense so excited to see where this one goes.
The introduction is captivating, love that you took it away from the norm
perfect read. Good job author...️
Very good Very good
More updates please
