TrueMonarch00
"Your highness. Your father is right. You as a royal heir has do things differently when claiming a mate. It is tradition to claim your mate on a night of a full moon. It is to honor the Moon Goddess for the pairing and ask for her blessing and protection. Please understand your highness; we are not the enemy here."
I haven't thought about school in years. My good sister got me kicked out in my last year of high school. Because I didn't complete high school I could not get a good job that will match my family's status. I couldn't help with my family's company.
That's right! I forgot Agrat was an alchemist!
Shinji was waiting for this moment for a single chance to defeat Kaname as he was really sensitive to sounds since he was blind...
"Hey Freshmen! Come and eat with us, we will be spending some time so it's better if we get to know each other!" Mana said. I nodded and walked towards them. For the mean time, I'll focus on harnessing my skills as a maven and then proceed to know more about my mom.
"What is wrong with you people, I already know this as Light Void told me, don't worry they won't be able to do anything to me."
Overall one of the best cultivation novels I've read
all i can write is good/awesome and amazing
"Of course you can."
I must say the story line is great. I love the idea of a dungeon-style cultivation novel. I don't think I have read anything like it before. The only downside I have seen so far is the grammar, a bit. I see you use present tense and not past tense a lot. That affects reading as I feel that the way the MC is talking isn't right. Maybe use past tense in the future. Other than that, I like it. Keep up the good work.
Only read 2 chapters for now. Need more chapters to discern the overall plot of the story, but so far it seems good and has the potential to turn into something big. Waiting for more chapters to be published.
Hey, the author is here to shamelessly rate my own novel!But on a serious note, this novel has been flowing in my brain for quite a long time and finally i get the change to share it with you guys.It's similar to The World Online, as i said in my author's notes however this won't be a copy & paste type of story.Enjoy it, it is not for those who wish to read a 'grand novel' with 'exceptional world building', it's just a story to read when you are bored and stuff.
