Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hi it's me again (Noobamstard). Currently I read chapter 1-10. The story looks like it is going to be a weak to strong type in which the MC trains up in another world while he is asleep. The MC is a resident of the slums in which the majority of the population of this world lives. He randomly gains a system that gives him acces to a game like world. The world background is decent. It is to early to talk about story developement. The MC seems to be the carefree type that classifies things he gets as "trash" or "OP" which is kind of confusing since his sitiuation as a poor buffon in the slums that has to shoulder the responsibility for his little sister stands in contrast to such behaviour. The grammar is substandard but okay given that this is Webnovel. Still I recommend an editor (it can be a friend that is as good as you with English but two pairs of eyes see more than one). Anyhow I am still exited about this story and will likely read on. However, there is one thing that is bugging me: Why is your novel uploaded twice on Webnovel? I will not continue giving feedback before that is solved. Having this novel twice will ultimatley upset your readers and stop you from advancing in the rankings. Keep on writing,Noobamstard
Gotta say I’ve been looking forward to a MC protagonist that is basically a beast tamer and here we have it. I really enjoyed the first few chapters. Hope you create more.
Wow, I don’t think I’ve ever read a novel that has such little idea about what it wants to do and be, and what the basic laws of how the world should function are, just for example it almost immediatly says if you die in the game you cant revive thats your one chance but like 2 chapters later you can revive just you have to restart, If your trashy like me youll probably still somewhat enjoy it but man are the inconsistencies annoying.
Great novel ? good humour.The story is very dark. hope the author has not abandoned it yet?This novel seems to not have been updated for some time.
I have read most of the novel but iam done I guess bcz I can't bear a for ed romance at all he first met Alice and they became rival and teammates for the quest and that was all good and I was really liking that idea but then she suddenly disappeared for no apparent reason and then there then introduce cloe and that seems really forced and she even forced him to date her and I really don't like her as a fml bcz that seems to forced I don't know why author have to do something so stupid when he/she was writing the story of shin and Alice so well but I guess that's their choice so Sayonara
eh, it was good, but then the cliche hits. mc saves a little demon girl and helps her cultivate. couldn't be bothered to know what happens after. If ur into these kinds of stories, then go on ahead.
The mc is unique and I can't wait for the rival "MC" and love interest/s, I'm excited for it. The trope and plot is quite refreshing. The novel is good and has potential. I love it~♡♡♡♡♡
Very poorly written and haphazard storyNot worth bothering to read even 40 chapters in trial read. The character is one dimensional and there doesn't seem to be any plot at all for the story. Total waste of time.
It is a good book but a bit more plot and story development is needed. In the end I'll stick with this book to see where it goes...................
I like the story so far great plot and not too cliche of a horror story beginning but it really helps and develops as our MC continues on and his squad
I don't understand how people could give this novel such a high rating, Did they delete 1-star reviews and added some fake 5-star ones?? Or did they rate summary at pilot read? It's also a butchered novel with westernized names. I wonder if the other two highly trial read novels are the same.. will check in a moment.. Before this I had fun reading "Protect Our Patriarch