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EZ 5 stars for the title alone.Bonk is justice. Bonk is life.No Horni. Slay all Thots.Also, flat is justice. Don't you dare disrespect the waifus.
Yuki Is Love, Yuki is Life and she even slaps Thots who try to touch her Wifu.If girls love and VRMMORPGs is your cup of tea, you have come to the right place.(Ps. Be sure to vote so we can read extra chapters)
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O protagonista é estupido, a namorada dele so serve como distração, o protagonista espera ser profissional em casa no sofa, eu acho que a teg misterio so foi colocada para justificar o baixo QI do protagonista, mas tem uma boa qualidade de atualizações de capítulos
I really like theme its not just martial arts and there's something deeper kind of thing.the chapters are stable which is a plus.overall great novel hope to see more chapters.
100% the best novel except for Outside of Time in the last 5 months. We don’t have to lose braincells from ”cultivation emulator” and ”god level drug dealer system.”
Well interesting story overall good/amazing job to the author.Warning it's mostly a open relationship so not for everyone I personally don't like it too much.Especially in one of the last chapters where we learn that Nora see other guys. That truly puts me off I was mostly okay with the few who where clearly open (mira/tsuru..) but that was quite bad (I talk only due to my preference, that completely make sens in the story)I have a little question for the author will the Mc be able to truly form his harem, close the open relationship Nora for exemple (even if there his some Yuri Tha persist ex Mira tsuru). That would help me decide if I continue due to me hating ntr (I know it's not but too close for me)
World building is good. Kind of hard to understand different words and culture at times. Also there is romance but dont think of good, caring romance. Its more of hoping the women will breed his children and thats it. MC isnt some hero. I would call him a Villan actually. He uses everyone around him to accomplish his goals. He has no Rremorse for other orcs or anyone that im aware of. Still a solid read so far just pretty slow at times but still interesting.
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Finished this novel yesterday but forgot to review so here's oneThe Writing Quality doesn't have any major mistakes that I've seen but there might be minor ones that I missedThe story Development is detailed and planned which I like, while the Update Stability isn't the best but at least the chapters have a lot of quality.The World Background is revealed as the story goes on, interesting things happen while some other things are yet to be revealed.
some good comedy NGL, plus fourth wall breaking done right in my opinion at least .
I'll br honest, I haven't read all that much. but I've read enough that I'm confused on the very basis of the story. and its also probably not a good sign when the names of the magic change in the literal synopsis. its definitely Interesting, the character from what I've seen is fine and the world is fairly fleshed out. but its not something g id be willing to sink more time into.
