I mean can you really blame him?
Ever since Mr. Fang started his journey for opening another branch of his shop, the story become comedy and Mr. Fang himself became a comedy character, but sh1t, even though I know there's something wrong, I can't help but enjoy this novel more! The story is really great!
Hello fellow readers, can someone spoil me as to this questions ? So i know if i want to continue the story or not. 1) Does MC ever mature and become a less pretendious prick? 2) Does MC ever stop sucking his own dick, just because he got lucky and got some OP contact lenses?3) Does MC ever become OP , as he should be? Because even though he has OP contact lenses as of chapter 100 he is still a fucking retarded piece of shit, who doesnt use his power for anything.Thank you for your cooperation : )
The novel was fun to read. If you can handle swear words and violence of the main characters, then read this book. Although there were some grammatical errors, still i enjoyed it
Okay, I've written about 145 chapters as of writing this, and it's time I update my initial review.
Firstly Writing Quality: Once again, I'm not native, but I feel I've done a decent job. The grammar isn't superb, but its readable, to the point where people can still enjoy reading.
Stability of Updates: Ooof, well my update stability has been horrible for the past few weeks due to other projects. But I'm back on track. Hopefully you guys see my new novel come up on your recommends.
Story Development: I've taken a slow pace approach at writing, and its paying off. There's a sense of gratification in the later chapters, seeing all everything coming together. I'm also proud of the plotlines I've implemented. If you follow along, you can see there is an overarching plot, and small scale plots. Things become very exciting past chapter 120.
Character Design: Suprisingly, I'm more impressed with the side character then the main character. Not to say that the main character is bad, he's just somewhat inconsistent at times, as I sometimes forget what his background used to be. But all his mishaps can be explained, though to be honest, it mostly because I'm still an amateur. As for mt favourite character? Conspiracist leafling.
World Background: 6/5 I'm very proud of the world I've built. Quite unique, type of stuff you can't read anywhere else. The only race you will know of are the humans, and maybe Fae, apart from that, you're in for a treat.
Nice start and has a good premise.
If you are into detective novels then I highly recommend you should try this.
The writing quality is almost perfect.
Just keep more chapters comming.
need more please. good stories. keep up the good work
The book is interesting to read. It seemed to be different concept than other books I read. Let's see how it will be in future
Very nice story Exciting Excellent I love every chapter Very much indeed fascinating You will glued reading every chapter Cant wait to read all chapters
I was really interested in the idea of a ghost in a world of magic, but then i read like 95 chapters hoping that at some point b now he would have become his original form as a male and not be a girl for over 90 chapters
Great StoryKinda frustrating for me not knowing the proper plot with his mother.Please post more .........................................
I read the mtl version and found the fruit ability that comes from this emotion is very similar to one of the mc abilities in the novel "Castle of Black Iron". the idea of the story like the devil is also very similar.