The last chapter finished every plot in a few lines. The future was written in few lines. Story was dragged and then pushed in a few lines to end. Not very fun.
XiaoHai I knew it. HAHAHAHAHA! Since that time with the girl classmate.
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Read 12 chapter of the story, and i can say I really found something interesting.No hi-fi vocabulary, simplified and easy to understand writing style...which is kind of weird.As an author myself, you changed quite a lot of my view about writing...I really mean it.Negatives-Pacing of story, and first chapter is kinda not that catchy... compared to the chapters you wrote ahead.Story... I won't say much about it since I only read upto ch 12.But so far, so good.Keep up the work
This book is great, one of the best I've read. hope it continues to get better.
Every chapter don't start where last chapter end and there are many things left to imagine us by ourselves . world building and character design are also so-so . I thought this is good novel but I was wrong beware of fake comments
Interesting but left a lot to be desired. Inwas intrigued by the synopsis of a psychopathic MC but left with a typical Japanese MC with a slight twist of psycho. Of course, he has a quirk of being overly bashful and shy that is typical of Japanese MCs to the point I just roll my eyes. Before the novel starts to charge for the chapters, the MC leaves someone alive for an unknown reason - which I assume it will be “answered away” later- but I found it to be completely unreasonable and frankly just a way for the author to push the plot forward. Pretty weak, imo.Now that is out of the way, I do like the MC and female lead relationship, especially how he helps her with her problem at home. The comedy is pretty good, the other characters have a lot of potential as well. The story seems to have a lot of depth to it possibly, so that is a plus as well. Overall, enjoyed a lot of the novel but annoyed with some other parts of the novel. The writing quality was decent for the most part but there were times of wrong verb usage, funny sentence structure, etc but it did not cause too much of an issue.
I have given 5 ? for everything but the update got 1 ? .....................,.......,.......................................................
This is a Burn. The tags and synopsis indicate this is a serious novel. This is NOT a serious novel. It does not belong in the Magical Realism category. Fulfilling the Magical Realism category would require the Author have some memory and care for what he wrote before. Magical Realism is like Sci-Fi. You are supposed to use and follow a set of rules and keep your plot organized and cohesive. If the tags were Spoof, Clueless MC and Comedy, then the right people would have read the novel instead of all of us looking for a serious and plot driven power novel based on the current synopsis and tags.
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Hey guys, shameless author here.What to expect before reading this novel:1. it will be a mix of dark and light theme. I'm hoping to focus a bit on the light theme aspect than the dark theme aspect.2. It wont be generic and only a handful of tropes will be implemented.3. Its a non-human mc. So, humans won't be the main focus.4. The mc's original world(earth) is a parallel world of earth. Historical and mythological themes will be implemented. So, if i get certain facts wrong, tell me.5. I would yall to not be shy and leave your thoughts in the section below.6. PLEASE VOTE!! I NEED IT