the author really cooked ?, love the novel till now
to be honest, has high potential, but a lot of wording mistakes along with number mistakes that pull you out of wanting to continue reading. the kids seem to be way more mature than they should be at the described ages. and alot of other small problems and consistency issues.
Wow. first chapter got me hooked. And I like the structure of the first chapter. I recomend this book.
I like the novel because I'm just being biased that the main protagonists has the same name as me
all i will say is "its super duper good"
The class leader quickly stand up. "Stand ... up ...."
Kenji is the type of race that resemibles me, of course because he has wings, but what is unique is, his accent and distinctive language, Kenji always uses the -desu word to end each sentence.
And Kenji just give a solution.
I answered with panting breath. "Yes, I remember Doc. I saw you have a good time with your assistant in a bathroom."
Alex had an hour or two of sunlight left before being informed that he was done for the day. He half expected Elizabeth to show up with perfect timing to inform him that he needed to do just a few more things.
"Oh so my father killed your father, I am truly sorry for your loss, but is killing me truly nessacary?"
Naruto turned to Tony, "I'll get someone to look into the situation you were talking about at Nexus. If we can somehow cut off Ultron's access to the internet, that'll give us an advantage."