I love it.update pleaseeee!!! I can wait for the story to progres. I like the caracters and the way they interact with each other. I love it
So like he has multiple different abilities but they apparently are just filler text because he doesn't really make good use of them, the author gives him certain abilities like the gamers mind yet he still passes out from fear of heights and other such things so it's like he doesn't even have it. The author writes in big blocky paragraphs making it hard to read. Overall there is so many inconsistencies, inconveniences(the paragraph size and punctuation), and even though the mc has apparently trained he still basically comes off as weaker than Ron. The only thing really going for the story is the amount of chapters and the update frequency. While I personally liked the premise of the story, and the general abilities he got, its sadly ruined by how the mc uses (or doesn't use) his abilities, and the way the mc acts.
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R M.S Titanic is always euals to pain and heartbreak author had done a great job . The story of Wallace is truly a legend. Thank you author for sharing this story.
This is a really cool novel. Ranging from the plot to the characters, everything is relatable and likeable. The writing might be improved, but the storyline, alongside the dialogues, is absolutely amazing. It was an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more chapters!
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It’s okay but the story is kind of scrambled Buuuuuuuuttt the theme is like animeAs for the characters it could use more information on the villain and the plot picks up in The second volume but it’s okay
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Never been this addicted to a book before. everything about it is perfect.
honestly its a very good novel tho i put 5 star update time in hopes that the author updates more he has or she has a very interesting concept and story thats well written id love to read it more often
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It was good till the start of the pest chapter not a fan of parasitic things that drain the MC and speak inside of his head Even if it will be usefull later on. And worst thing is you tie them togerher rather than getting rid of it