Another gem in the making with Beast Cultivation as the main theme..........................................................................…………......….............................................
is it just me or does this story have many similarities to emperor's domination?
Author here.This novel has been re-uploaded in this new link. If you like to see the reviews of the original link, check it on my profile.In any case. Due to the delay, I uploaded 5 new chapters from where I left it off and will try to upload a chapter a day(can't totally promise) for a few days.Thank you for your continued following and reading.
Probably the most decent among the new trials. There's some flaws in the translation but overall it's interesting.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.
I love this! I’ve read one other book so far like this, but they differ in amazing ways possible! Shane is an arrogant, cocky boy who dies and now must navigate this in between world. He has a big heart though, as he saves both Frank and Tess. He also has this dark cosmic power that makes everyone around him afraid of him. Though, I don’t see him being a real threat. He seems to be aware of everything he does and doesn’t truly want to do harm to anyone as long as they don’t do harm to him or his sister.I’m intrigued.
Great story good good good.good pacing and no idiots young masters release more release more release more???????????????????
basically plagiarised queen of monster breedingeverything so far is basically the same except Kalona became Catherine, essentially made minor changes so that the plagiarism isn't blatant.of course I could be wrong but from where I'm sitting ?u200d♀️
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
I love this novel. development of mc is very good. Though I don't like his name. most characters have western names who lives in eastern world. mc has indian name which I like. but then he chooses Japanese name. I think if you had chosen Japanese names first, which shows that his mind is stuck in the anime world, nd then chose a villainous name like ravan, or shakuni, or kans. it would have been amazing. raj is a fine name too. but orochi name just doesn't feel right. I remember reading 1 novel which also had the concept of mc using stats in cultivation world, but it failed in the story department. but this one is pretty good. it takes time and the development is realistic.I specially love the indian references. are you gujarati too like me??And I appreciate the effort you put in for the lore behind monsters. But I would like to say that you move on from the first arc soon. bcz i feel like we have spent too much time here. it is time for mc to explore. also, don't make the loli girl harem member. and if you do, then don't make it loli. she feels like a child to me. if she matures then I don't have a problem.keep up the good work. I'm supporting you with power stones. I would give at least 1 power stone to you everyday.
It’s a shame the Author stopped writing; the novel is very exciting and is a good read for people who like OP MC’s. If the author ever continues, a lot of people would be happy.
I dont know about the author affecting his rating by creating alt accounts. if thats true, its pretty scummy. His story on the other hand is also pretty scummy.The quality of the writing is not bad, i can understand whats going on even with the weird time jumps. The problem for me is that i just cant get behind the underlying meaning and essence of this story.The author's writing comes across the page like a child trying to write like an ***** to justify that he understands existentialism, with banal prose about an unjust universe. The main character is evil, and doesnt really have any sort of weight or qualms about it. He goes from normal all his life to murder without any character justification. Being evil and mc is fine, there are a bunch of those and I have no problem with it. Yet, this novel really makes being evil so uninteresting.The MCs main conviction is that the world owes him something. What?!His life is of someone being pampered and rich with no real suffering. Yet, it sucks cause he is so untalented and its unfair. BooHoo, whine, whine, whine. Its also really annoying to read, that this whiny child then gets a chance to change his life with help from a god like being. So does the character learn anything, strive for anything, or go out there and try to be better. The short anwser is no. He arrives in a land of magic which is almost identical to his own world, but there is magic. Is it difficult for him in any sense to navigate this new world? Nope. Is there any problem with him trying to get magical powers. HaHa..., no. He has money, logistics, and manpower rightoff the bat. To then literally discover how magic is created in humans after sacrificing vagrants and the homeless. I would also like to mention that he was given some weird ethereal power for guessing things, and then he would be provided a either hot or cold response by better google.He doesnt earn anything and is given everything on silver platter. He is unapologetic with his whining about how he is special when a god like being tells him he isnt. He is just the worst.if you like that sorta thing, this is your novel. i couldnt make it that far in. if the novel progresses in a way later down the line to play on those themes and maybe have some character growth. thats awesome. Im just not down to go on that ride.