I really want to give this story better rating, and I try to. But I just can't. There is no question about translation or update. The real problem is the author (I think??). The story pretty much using the same template with other story from this author (Mu Dan Feng), who loves to make reader laugh in the pretty lovey dovey moment in the beginning. Then when you hooked to the story, it begin downhill, 1 way to another, usually because the ML so secretive, FL too stubborn/fooled by ML, then lead to death/ separation of the couple. With tons of angst and rage (thrown by reader), although there will be "redemption" episode, but it's still pretty scarred the reader's weak heart. Please just read this story if you ready for tons of angst in the middle of story or get used to read this particular author's style. Honestly reading this like being in toxic relationship with emotional M tendency, you know it's gonna be bad, but you read it anyway, just for the funny + torture and angst moment.
If you haven't read this novel before, then you miss one incredibly good novel.The story really got a lot of unexpected twist and the plot is amazing. World building is unlike what other does, no info dumping, no filler chapter. The story for you who likes a witty, smart, and aweaome MC, with some laugh inbetween, and imense fight at the center.
As soon as I read the synopsis, I had a feeling this novel would be impressive. Once I delved into the initial chapters, the writing completely drew me in, and the original concept (in the first chapter) cemented my curiosity to see what else the author has in store for us. The first chapter was truly unforgettable and well-written. I'm only a few chapters into the novel, but I'm excited to experience the story and will continue following it.
Can't continue pàst ch3.. just bad writing.No description for scenes, incoherent flow of events, no characterisation, and downright mtl level dialogue writing author has a very rudimentary understanding of writing and the language in general, should really focus on it if he wants to continue in this... at the very least check for the grammar before posting through a proofreader
Let's go, now this is going to be fun, maybe not as good as some other novels but a change of pace nonetheless, let's see where the story takes me, but I am looking forward to it...
It’s really nice and I really enjoy the story line and I’m hoping to read to the end and I really appreciate the author for this incredible story It’s an opportunity to read this story I wish you to read more amazing stories and comics from this app and I’m looking forward to more stories from the author
I walked a dark path away from a falling sun that shed no light. I saw a blind man with a floating scimitar that seemed to dance all around him. He meditated within the stars as if there he was grounded. With a simple thought, like a hawk the sword found me it's prey. With praying hands I ceased it's play, between my hands rest it's fate. As the sword fractured the man flew backwards and the stars seemed dismayed. They let out a scream, my ears did bleed 300 more souls were safe.
The introduction of the mysterious system and the quest at the end created a lot of intrigue, I am very excited about what will happen next!
This is a review of the first four chapters. In this story, the main character takes a detour on the way home from school and ends up in a supernatural world. He then desperately tries to escape from this supernatural world, but he keeps being pulled back. The plot is scary, but the numerous run-on sentences and other grammatical mistakes dull the shock.
Interesting premise and I love the fact this kid is thrown into such a crazy world, but he is doing his best to make it through it all. I am happy the author is willing to put so much work into this one.
Sadly this book wasn't picked. :( It was really promising and I would have loved to read more. :( Now we will never know how this awesome story would have progressed.
Love the OP MC, still have grammar mistakes, need daily updates,author-san post more chapters please..................................................................140.....................................................................