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Hello everyone! I hope you may give Blood Warlock a chance, as you will undoubtedly like it, I can vouch for that!Those who already knows me from my other novel know that everything I write has a deep meaning in it, so I can assure 0 plot holes.Without more to say, let's enjoy this story together!
This is a good wish fullfillment book. Its to bad it wasn’t picked by Web Novel. exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
A very cool world with a very unique background. The language is solid and easy to read. All in all a good story in my opinion. Keep up the good work.
Okay, so what I love about this novel is it's funny, The characters are amazing love the plot, the story development, Keep it up Author love your work!!
Reading Status: C21
Writing Quality 5/5
Stability of Updates 5/5
Story Development 4/5
Character Design 4/5
World Background 3/5
The total score: 4.2
The writing quality is pretty good, so even with an instant google translation, I can understand everything perfectly, although a little more detail would be appreciated sometimes, you know. It is worth mentioning that sometimes more dialogue makes the interaction more organic, but it depends on the context, where sometimes the descriptions can say much more than a character's point of view. The important thing is to virtually understand the sensations described (as a reader), which makes everything better to enjoy.
The upload stability is consistent, I can not say more.
I can infer the development of the story, but I still look forward to seeing how it will be dealt with Kingdombuilding, one of my favorite tags. Which relates to the world background, well, while it's understandable that the central point of the story is the concept of the MC's system, the world that the MC will experience is still green.
The character design is what catches my attention, and I can say that the author is consistent with this. I can understand that at some point there are always generic characters, and not all of them can be reflected by words like "alive" or at least dynamic, but from what I can see, I won't be disappointed. The "important" characters in the story will not be empty per se.
The concept of the story is what fundamentally attracted me to read. The synopsis reflects well what you will find if you read this, so I won't beat around the bush. If the potential I see is used in the right way, this can be very good. #NoNTR
Otherwise, good job.
This has the signs of a legendary adventure... Regardless of where the story goes, I'm already in love with the characters. I am ready to go on this amazing journey with @littlegiant7
Don't know where to start from. So I'll start from anywhere.1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading.So good job author2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up.3) Character design is perfect. Especially our Alexander the first.4) Despite the time and dedication our author is putting in this novel. He still updates everyday, what a perfect author.5)World background; It is so perfect, that I feel like reincarnating there. Still hope on God anyway.
it seemed author really did some research about what his writing. Great!
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Thank you Taintedmetal for this collection of interesting experience.it did at some point felt relevant to everyday lIfe. The stories reflect just drawn thoughts of the author probably a series of them which i find with a lot of humor at the begining which is lIght for laughter and the at the middle which could be related to real life experience and the a little deep in thought part in the end and closing. i find the part when Cynthia punch Diah hillarious i was laughing out loud. The letters back and forth interesting. And you finding the two voLunteers to be cannabalised through the “web” - good use of pulling reading through different dimensions. it’s like and makes a reader laugh over it ?good work!
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