I really and still hate the male lead and now i even hate the female lead like come on when will you start your revenge? Also in 433 chapter..i think the motherf*ckng male lead will force her and she wont f*cking do anything about it -_- i mean maybe she does care but i skip it..probably because I'm on chapter 400+ but still nothing good like when will it start?did she forget everything already? I mean i know by some means she doesn't but BRUH ...ughhh this is the most frustrating and irritating and infuriating novels i read ughhhh... If she ended with the male to the end then...the female leads transmigrations is useless
Please don't except those maid...
overall ok but in starting i was confused as author was making connections to another novel but it is ok at this point as later i understood the flow but the author is focusing too much on a single side character to wa zi( mc is now only mentioned in the passing only when he needs his protection only) I think it is because he thinks he( to wa zi) is funny or something but it is not and because of that I am dropping this novel here
The story is very good, probably the best there is on the subject of football, although there is a novel that is very good, but that is not the theme, the real problem of this story, or what for me is a problem, is which develops very, very slowly, if in each game there are 3 or 4 episodes, we will never be able to see him play on a professional team, for the rest, it is very good.
Nice book though they are some spelling errors✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
Problem: The Sun.Solution: One billion lions.
disclaimer- this is not a review. This is just to help out the author.In the synopsis the last line states "treats" where I assume threats is meant to be.I am not nitpicking just pointing it out to see how many people noticed it without glossing over it accidentally.:)
TRUTH AUTHOR why did you make the MC of this novel into D girl more better than genderbender female or male..That's why I hate EPIC OF CATERPILLAR that novel is so dumb with a gender bender. the novel is centered male hero but why is THE MC Kureina female always it dumb why not D GIRL . EPIC OF CATERPILLAR IS DUMB NOVEL Kureina is a total marriage sue who those not work hard for anything and she eats the human children because they are useless and for the skill points..kireina is so dumb she did not take science and technology skills SCIENCE IS GOD..why was your novel this FTNR
The story was good well the translation. If the writer make the mc a lowkey person then why not make the mc live in a place with no cultivators and be a landlord or farmer. The daughters can be train and be discipline if they live in rural areas without arrogant people in it.
This is a review after reading 52 chapters of the story. The story is, like the title suggests, a cultivation story with a system. Now, what I like about the story.Pros :1. The first person narrative that author uses. It’s extremely unique in cultivation novels which are usually done in third person. Refreshing for those that want to try a cultivation novel written in a different way than others.2. Writing quality is excellent, I mean, there are no glaring flaws. That’s already an up as that’s all you really need. Author is pretty experienced, so this is to be expected.3. Update stability is great, so that’s another major plus for the story. 4. Although MC has his flaws, what Mc has no flaw? The flaws are there to make us readers symphatize with the Mc and watch him grow. The longer we read, the more we see him fix his flaw and slowly mature into the ’ideal MC’ Cons :1. MC relies too much on his system. Yes, it’s a system story, and I also get that one should exploit a cheat once they have it, but Mc needs to also learn to be more independent and instead of asking system all types of questions that he probably knows the answer to, ask more thorough ones that we readers don’t already know. Of course not all of the information is useless as there is a lot useful one, but it can be a bit tedious.Perhaps skip all those unecessary words by writing something like, ‘MC for the next hour or so asked MC all sorts of questions. Dumb as some of them were, he wanted to get everything straight, not missing anything out. After all, just a single detail could cost his life.’ Makes the MC look smarter and skips a lot of unecessary information that can be spread throughout the chapters.2. This is more of a personal preference, but in first person narrative, I feel like the paragraphs are a bit too chunky. Can be cut shorter to be more pleasing to the eyes. (Just my personal preference.)3. MC can be a bit indecisive at times, but that’s normal, jn fact, this is not even a con, I’m just putting it here in case Author forgets that character development exists. I get that MC is in an unfamiliar world, but CD is very important, don’t forget this.Well, that’s all from me. Although it looks like there are more cons than pros, most of the cons are just my suggestions to author on how he could develop the story for future continuity.Those flaws can easily be fixed and contribute to future of the story.Good story, would recommend.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The author is this dropped?
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