Outside of Time
I swear Shura's wrath was a total shock! Like slowdown the power up please
I feel uncomfortable at chapter 192 ..... the mc is still going even his partner pass out ...and he still show that to his sister ...poor sister
From what I see the stability of the updates is nice - not that I look at that normally, as I know myself that sometimes it's difficult to write and post all the time ^^
I like the language used here - not too fancy, but not too basic. Perfect in-between so that even people who aren't native to English may enjoy the story without getting confused.
As for characters - what I loved most was when I spotted a Polish name (makes me wonder if you too Dear Author, like me, are Polish ;) ). It's still pretty early but I think both the characters and the world are evolving nicely.
I have one recommendation - the dialogue options would be more visible and it would be easier to read if you'd use B or I with them - it is a bit tiring on the eyes without it <3
I hope Dear Author you'll see this as an encouragement to keep writing. One day you'll get more words like this, so keep it up - sharing your imagination with the world is a beautiful thing, so don't stop :)
Main story is honestly just good stacking material, a bit aggravating because of the author being basically an amnesiac but alt ending is extremely good..
Korean authors trying not to write about regression and apocalypses:
(Not trying to diss the work in any way just thought it’d be funny)
I find reverse harem weird but really intriguing. I'll add this one.
Na dropped it at that point..idc why he killed them. It aint game of thrones
I planning to do the same as you bro i wish to learn japanese for anime, korean for some murim and regression fantasy novels and chinese for Ri.
Soooo when's the next chapter coming?
I usually bookmark newest chapter or where i stopped reading on chrome, you should give it a try =)
What a sh*tty ending man