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a novel where above 15chapter is a new world introduce every chapter though the world is 1 chapter only and it is rush introducing the plot from the movie or books then change only a few things inserting mc presence in the plot and ordering people taking leadership role of the heroes and world making sure mc doing something on the chapter so the chapter can be send out some of the female characters quickly fell in love with mc by meeting him half a day maybe less and over all it is an ok novel if you want a super fast pace novel
Great start. Great development. please Continue.
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first thing : I enjoy this novelthe reasons : - the MC s poised, he keeps his calm even when he is insulted, as he needs to protect his family, so far he's the only that's really done that in what I've read, at the same time he doesn't let weaker people step on him when it shouldn't happen- the MC is not a complete cheat like existence like it often happens, there is a system but everyone has access to it. so far there's only one time during which it can be said there's plot armor (the stone)- In the "cultivation world" there cannot be the intervention of someone overwhelmingly stronger as they go to other areas after becomming strong enough and they can't come back, I think it is great for the stability of the novel, and it enshures there won't be a ridiculous jump in strength coming from nowhere for the MC - the world building has started in the 70ish chapters, so don't worry about it, in any case the novel is likely to have more than 600 chapters (or so I think - in any case it does have a great potential in terms of number of chapters)the last point leads to me criticizing the haters : how THE HELL can you criticize a novel on its world building when you've only read as few as 10-20-30 chapters ???!? are you for real ?! I mean, seriously all the novels I've read on Qidian so far are bound to have hundreds if not more than a thousand chapters, just give the novels a chance to grow and set a foundation for the characters before the world, you are just being ridiculous otherwise, it's like relying on first impression to categorize people, it's nonsensicalThanks for reading me :)
I have read this story upto CH 680. So I probably have a good idea about the story. Next, their might be SPOILERS. Lots of them. So you are warned. I will try to be general and vague, but no promise.I am dividing the review into multiple sections which each section focusing on major points or issues.CLICHES : Let's just accept that their is no running from clichés. Authors have probably tried all different ways a story can go leaving us with numerous repetitions and iterations of the same thing. Fortunately ,this story has clichés, but author has done his best to not make it a copy-paste of some random CN Novel. And honestly, it's time we stop crying over clichés and just accept it as a major part of Chinese literature. And yes, that was an underhandedly insult.Cultivation : It isn't exactly unique, but it does have few places where it shines. And we can't expect him to come with some new method of cultivation and magic. Not everyone is Brandon Sanderson. ( And his methods are weird but awesome ). The cultivation techniques are mixed and heavily inspired from many famous novels. I won't name them but all CN Novel veterans will probably realise quickly. During the early part of the novel, that's about until Ch 400(?) his cultivation technique was a major subplot. Even in later chapters it is and will play a part. His technique gives him Monster QI, which automatically makes him the enemy of Human kind.Techniques : Overly top names with special effects. What else to say?World : Just like most cultivation world's. Noob Village go Noob town to Noob City to Player 10-25 Village to Player 10-25 town and so on. Basically, the usual. It has its bright spots but mostly the same. Although Monster World and Ascending World's are still an enigma.MC : He's okay. No Rape Guy. No Cruel MC. Not an MC who loves to destroy sects just for fun. Hardworking. Mostly calm. So no Lin Ming, Chu Yan or anything. It's probably not an harem despite numerous girls having an interest in him. He just wants to find his teacher.OP Cheats? : Yes. But it's given by his teacher and not something belonging to him. They are basically top level treasures of that world. She stole them...she highhandedly took them and gave it to the MC. His Heaven Root? Belongs to the Phoenix god. His mind power stuff? It's an Buddhist seed. The technique? It's some supreme technique.Enemies : You have both intelligent as well as run of the mill enemies. Don't expect intelligent MCs at the level of TTNH or any novel by that author.I should have basically covered everything? Any doubts? Post it below.Sorry for any mistakes. Some are mine others are mostly my mobile hanging up on me.
I've read over 900 chapters of this novel, and I can honestly say that it is one of my top 5 favorite novels. The world that is built in this story is fascinating, and it continues to expand as the novel progresses. The changes to Earth are still partially unknown to the human race, which leadsleads to a sense of mystery in the story.The main character comes off as lazy at first, but we slowly find out that he has a special gift for concentration that aids him in learning skills and cultivation techniques. He gets into many funny situations, like spouting random BS to another student, who later declairs him as his master when it helps him have a breakthrough. As the story progresses, the MC realizes his own weakness and strives to be one of earths most powerful protectors.The supporting characters in the story are unique and have their own strengths that develop as the story unfolds. The MC and his friends slowly come to terms with the human races' weakness compared to higher dimensional races, and search for their own ways to break the shackles of mortality to reach the mythical realm.
What a unique storyline and reading experience. Enjoyed reading and looking forward to the remaining Codename books.
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Okay so let me just say this right out: Meng Wang is absolutely despicable and I need everyone to agree with me on this. Here's a girl who was stolen from her family as a baby, raised by pastry vendors, divorced and humiliated by the Shen family—and what does her own brother do? He literally allowed Ruoli to marry Shen Qian instead, effectively handing his biological sister over to the people who destroyed Meng Shuhe's life. And then he has the AUDACITY to glare at her and call her greedy for extorting compensation? The nerve. The absolute audacity. "Your sister is the daughter of our Pingyuan Houfu. How is being the wife of the Zhenguogong Shizi 'climbing the ladder'?" — Marchioness Pingyuan basically said everything I was thinking. But here's what really got me: Meng Wang's justification was that Meng Shuhe "insisted on interfering and breaking up the couple." So in his mind, the person who disrupted his carefully laid scheme is the villain? Not the person who enabled the whole thing? This character is so thoroughly rotten that it's almost impressive. And then there's the whole dynamic with Lu Jing, who apparently has zero self-awareness. He finds out Meng Shuhe is the Pingyuan Houfu's daughter and immediately decides she's his Taizifei candidate. Like... bro, you forced a marriage on her, abandoned her, and now you're just casually claiming her? The fact that Empress Qin seems perfectly fine with this arrangement makes me want to scream. What kind of palace is this where women are just... traded around like property? But honestly, the most fascinating relationship thread here is the one between Meng Shuhe and the child in her womb, Lu Xiu. A talking fetus who's already fourteen years old in spirit and fiercely protective of his mother? "This makes me so angry! It's a good thing this guy dies early!" — I literally laughed out loud. This kid is already running a full character arc inside there and he hasn't even been born yet. Who is this child really going to be when he grows up? Because if he inherits even half of Meng Shuhe's steel, the future of this story is going to be absolutely electric. And what about Lu Jing's true love? We know she exists, we know she's pregnant with his child, and we know he's planning to make Meng Shuhe and Lu Xiu "make way" for her. That is a powder keg waiting to explode, and I am HERE for it.
Great read! Enjoyed it
I love this book