This novel is a whole mess. The main character makes stupid decision after stupid decision. Plot makes no sense main character still doesn’t have any agency within the story besides being a magnet for trouble and poor choices. Read this as a free novel and it quicklY falls apart after locked chapters. I’d stay away from this novel
I had to drop this at chapter four. The book may get better but, it is asking little much when you devote an entire chapter to (This new game is a secret from everyone) and then immediately follow it with (at 20 minutes since the game launched thousands of players logged in and ""guilds"" were exclaiming wow at our MC).As of chapter 4 the main character had only bought the game 3 and a half hours ago, and only had one hour and a half of play time. For a game where the CEO is pissed that one person may know he wants to sell something, you can't suddenly throw in guilds and a thriving intake money to teal money system over a three hour period. I am sorry, you put a hard short timeframe for the main characters actions and then ignored it for everything else. It takes time for a game system.that costs thousands of dollars per unit to sell. It takes advertising for ANYone to buy it. A second chance book can be good. But this one trips over itself trying to show how OP the second chance is too fast at a cost.
Good read only ready first part but from what I have read so far it is an amusing story full of subtle serious notes while having a healthy dose of comedy
Great story and all. But the age of the MC makes people hate him. How can a toddler be so lustful and the women who try seduce a little child like that is disgusting not entertaining. If you changed the age of the MC to around 12 then it would be more understandable not a little toddler under 2ft bossing around old men
I've listened the entire book its very good would not recommend to people who are easily influenced by words, but its a really great book the fights are legendary and the meaning of this story/novel is so, i don't know how to explain it (Spoiler) he becomes immortal emperor or heavenly emperor Huang ruling all ages i would love to see what happens or if there's a part 2 to this book will definitely read
Can someone explain why this horribly bad novel is allowed to be released, while an amazing gem like Pursuing Immortality doesn't get any new, TL, or mention?
Honestly I'm not sure about this. I read most producer novel out there. While at some point they are mostly getting bored after few hundred chapters, maybe this was the first novel in the genre that I put down after 60 ch.It's a little bit boring and really not as exciting as other "plagiarized things in other universe" since the presentation in this novel is very bland, it's like just directed a movie, produced toys and repeat. I do think it's probably will be getting interesting later since MC actually want to direct 'real movies' but I somehow can't feel the vibe to keep reading.
It's very interesting. Only I don't know it's unique or no. But I have not seen a similar work.
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the biggest problem the story has is things that happen off screen. information is obtained, system ui is explored, and abilities are obtained without any reader knowledge.The entire digital realm and what that means is ignored entirely, acting the same as a system-magic transmigration to another atom-based world.the final major problem I can think of is that mc has changed class three times already and I have no idea what that means, if it means anything.the above being said, it's a fun story with developed characters that are different from each other and interact in funny and interesting ways. character growth may be abrupt, but it's better than stagnant characters.
Mc is ok but the story is trash first he hunts most of the time where there is lvl 40-50 humanoid monsters he is using trash sword and equipment how!!! i dont know... would allllll those monsters he killed not drop good equipment??? he is in a high lvl area??? second we have no idea what are the equipment stats.... third way is everyone stupid in this world there is like 2 people who have normal intelligence almost all of them are like young masters from those cultivation novel wtf???? This is suppose to be a high tech advance civilization that have developed VR way the **** is everyones IQ 10???? I really hate this kind of Chinese novel they dont make fucking sense everyone of them have that 4th grade syndrome or whatever it is called.. it would be much better if the author did a novel about this guy but he got transported in another world where he got a kids body and has talent to become a mage but he is really weak this way we could see how mc grows into a real combat mage not this stupid ****
Lmao they deleted my review because it was a bad review criticizing their novel selection system!!!Feel bad for this book getting hate and all but deleting every bad review doesn't help the image of this book or the damn company!!!