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The idea was good, but I don't know why, by the third chapter I felt completely stupid reading it...
Up to chapter 33 , about 80 % of this story si about a bunch fantasy old man saying slang and cit about popolar web games and pop culture in china , 10% si about how cool the mc is, the rest is the novel, one of the worst story in QI , complete waste of time
Nyah i sense a shameless mc nyahh..i sense a scoundrel nyah..i hope this would be good...waiting for 100+chapa nyahhhhahahahahah nya nyahLets Spread the Nyahhhhh~
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Lot's of potential in the story and i like how you are able to describe the details....... I wish you good luck and can't wait to read further
highly disappointing even after 150 he still does not have a class and events happen so fast.
PLEASE tell me this book isnt dead! I LOVE THIS BOOK!!! The humor is on point, story makes sence and character development is flawless! I cant tell how many times i had people at work or home lookin at me wierd bc i suddenly start laughing like a lunatic XD
Isn't this novel already translated up to 100 something chapters ?. I remember reading it on xianxiaworld. Translating again from beginning is such waste of time.
I read this before and I really like the story. I was stockpiling this and then it was in hiatus and now its here and I have to use coins to be able to read this... so I can know the ending, but I do not understand why I have to wait for the update when this is already been completely translated before???
lets start not from 1 st position but from lastworld background- interesting idea, putting a mage in cultivation world and lets see how he will live and possibly thrive, 5 stars just for thatupdate stability- new reader here, i think its stable so 5 character design, thats the point when the story starting to go downhill, like many novels here character is like from wood, with some epiaodes of emotions, that are explained in brutally blunt way. But i think you.can get used to this.story development- sometimes generic sometimes not, average writing quality- for me the worst art of book, I can see potential in this story, but it just geta worse with all this explainingobvious thinks. Second, you can find many repeadly used words sometimes every 2 sentences you can see repeditions of previous sentence, for me its absolute no no for people who dont expect good quality and logic in story, interesting idea for a book is just not enought for me.
Worst translation I ve seen. ”he” becomes “she” on the next line and comes back to ”he” later. ”soul condensation” becomes “spirit refinement” then “soul refinement”. Can’t remember all but last is “ye cheng” becoming “ye city” and “flat river dynasty” becoming “ping jiang dynasty. The story is still pretty good but the translation is even worse than google translate
