AmeliaGladhispiU
I read the previous version of the novel and thought it was great. It's not easy for me to bind myself to a book, but I was fascinated by this story from the start; the characters are well coordinated and the dialogues between them feel lifelike and authentic. The characters themselves also differ from what you see in most books, not for the bad, but for the good, as some characters have disabilities to contend with, thus giving the novel a breath of fresh air.The course of the story is fascinating, combined with good writing quality. I personally recommend the book to readers who like stories about ghosts and how to fight them.
i have no way to express how much more recognition this story deserves, i have read hundreds and hundreds of books online and off, and still in the short time of a day or two this jas become one of my favorite books if not just straight up my favorite. if your just thinking on reading this right now, browsing the comments deciding on whether or not this is worth your time, please just give it a chance, it is.
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Good morning Mr author I hope you are doing. I just wanted to say I love this book so please keep write. Don't mind me I am out of words so. Km km km mm km km kkkkkkkkkkk
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The synopsis really attracted me am sure this book will be worth awhile another creative work from the same author nicccccccccceeeeeeee ???????
It's a nice story. From the early chapters I can already tell there is a lot of action to be seen in the later chapters. The story has a slow build up but there are some typos. Other than that I say it's good. Keep writing author.??
Pros: The quality of the writing is superb.Characters are relatively well thought out and have personalityWorld is pretty good, couple things are a bit strange but that may be due to a slow build up.Cons:Story is all over the place, a lot of missing information that would make some parts easier to keep together.The Update Stability is what makes this book hard to stay excited for; 2 chapters a week isn’t uncommon for amateur writers. One problem is the chapters are a little short.But the BIGGEST issue is the cost of reading, specifically the Privilege Access. 700+ coins for 9 chapters is not a fair price. Privilege lasts a month, approximately 8 chapters a month for 700+ coins is not worth the money readers will have to pay.I am able to pay that amount, (and I DO, I honestly enjoy this novel) but for an average reader I would not recommend doing so.
The world setup is great, which is why it is so disappointing that the mc has such an unlikable personality. The only character growth is negative and repetitive. There are less than half a dozen people who the mc even considers worth talking to, but he'd let them all die for a 5% increase in power.
i liked your old story alot before this rewrite and was quite confused why but reading this one i like this one alot more than the last one the only reason its a 4.8 is because of the mc's father and all the other retards like them in the story who annoy me that being said the villains and antagonist did their purpose to make the readers dislike them but every one has different opinions so its at 4.8
Flynn was a unique well established MC there is. He is great, just like the rest of the characters. Normally I don't like Gaming world novels but this one hooked me up right from the first chapter. Binge read this gem and you won't regret it.
It's definitely a good read for me. Plot is interesting and the cliche count isn't that much when compared to other works of this genre.It's easy to understand the reasoning of the main character, making it easier to connect to the story.World building looks good so far. With kingdoms, sects, villages etc.Overall it's a solid 4.6 for me
