nice story
80 Chapters 06/24/2023
Where did King victory go .... Update please
Interesting
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43 chapters 8-15-2024
I really liked this story. I loved the development and the growth of the characters. Is there the possibility of a sequel in the future?
Very interesting book
Loved the book and finished it over a few days. The expressions of the love, pain and joy of the characters felt so real. It would be better if proper proofreading was done.
What makes this chapter so tense is that the stakes are layered. On the surface, it's about stolen manuscripts and money. But dig deeper and everyone has something vital at risk. Xu Lingling needs that sixty yuan prize money because she's trying to support her family and prove herself. Xu Zhizhi needs the recognition from the essay contest because it's her way out of this life. Wang Pandai needs to please her grandmother because disobedience means punishment. And Lu Yuchuan needs to maintain order in the courtyard because his authority is being challenged. The fake emergency scene is where the tension really peaks. Xu Zhizhi is running through the streets, panicked, convinced her friend is in danger. The reader is right there with her, heart pounding. And then the reveal-that it was all a distraction. The stakes shift from 'is Jiao Jiao okay?' to 'we've been played.' That pivot is masterful. But what really raises the stakes is the community aspect. This isn't just Xu Zhizhi vs. Wang Pandai. It's the entire courtyard watching, judging, participating. When Hu Xiuping points out that things have been missing from their houses too, it becomes a collective issue. The theft isn't just personal-it's a breach of trust in the community. And the ending leaves us with real uncertainty. Xu Zhizhi says she won't pursue it 'this time' but the Security Department is involved now. Wang Pandai is humiliated but not defeated. Xu Lingling fainted, which could be genuine illness or another manipulation. The conflicts aren't resolved-they're escalated. That's what makes me want to keep reading.
The review from the two-star reviewer is utterly absurd. They seem to have unrealistic expectations, assuming the main character (MC) should be perfect in every way. The MC, after experiencing physical and psychological trauma, finds themselves in a typical horror game, with their body taken over and unsure of their circumstances. As they navigate helping four young children survive, they must maintain a ghostly presence to avoid altering the storyline. If they don't, dire consequences await.
For an adult leading children through such a situation, one can only imagine the disappointment expressed in the two-star review. The reviewer probably hasn't had real-life experience taking care of minors, as the comment suggests. The translation, on the other hand, does a commendable job capturing the essence of the characters' thoughts.
The critique is harsh, but it's clear that some readers come expecting an overpowered, one-dimensional character with inappropriate interests, similar to the Japanese version. However, the appeal of this story lies in its relatable, human MC, not in mindless action. The plot stands out, receiving a development score of 5 out of 5, making it a gem worth reading. It's a beautifully touching tale that resonates with readers.