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I think I will only leave hearts here for this amazing work.
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love the novel, it's fun to read
also probably one of the best idol/vtuber novel I've read on webnovel, though probably because there isn't any vtuber/idol novel that is still continuing, but even if there was a lot of vtuber/idol novel, I could still confidently said that this is one of the best novel I've read
FYI webnovel tend to be... difficult sometimes and delete the draft chapter or the already published chapter... so just be ready to have some backup if that do happen again
really glad you started updating again. I can start your 2nd book. was holding off as it seemed you dropped this one. great story arc, character's are very well developed!!! keep the updates coming
It's actually relatively good, as trial reads go. Be warned however: large portions of this novel will be nonsensical or unsuited to other parts of the novel. Examples include the nonsense that is his only attack skill, the fact that literally nothing he does costs any resource, his obsession with equipment over skills, the general lack of sense with stats, and the entire setup surrounding those stupid "death soldiers". This is not the author's fault, but rather the fault of the transcriber, who has changed major portions of this story and added random stuff in to pad out the differences in order to avoid copyright infringement while copy pasting almost literally everything else without regard to whether it makes sense to leave it that way. In the original story the MC actually does have an SSS talent which removes resource costs, is a mage who can fuse skills together, and doesn't even posess a system at all much less a horde of soldiers to murder his enemies for him. A lot of scenes will make much more sense if you keep in mind that the original author didn't have him as an invincible tank with an army.
nice to read this novel. cant wait to read the next chapter. i hope this novel will be chosen. the story so far so good to read. the development of the sfory kinda fast but not boring.
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I got to chapter 34 and can say that the writing has improved, and seems like a good story so far. I am looking forward to how this book will go.
Overall I feel that the world building and character development is done just right for the beginning of the book thus far.
As for story development I personally like the path taken where there is a goal seen already for the plot, with an easy path to continuing further.
An interesting story that attempts to combine Sect-Building and Business Building.
Things I liked:
-Combines concepts that I like.
-Some of the characters are entertaining.
Things I didn't like:
-Translation is atrocious. It made my head hurt at times
-World building is almost none existent. A lot of things are simply not explained.
-The focus is heavily biased towards the business side of the story, but maybe that would have been solved in future chapters.
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