Ngl I didn't expected much from this kind of premise but you did a good job delivering the story. Also tbth I think this one is better than your first book, you're improving and I, who has read both of your works, love to see you developing so great job.The characters' are still being introduced but I like Sam, he gives me Klaus vibes from the originals and I f'king love it! The world is being set up and you're doing a good job keeping your readers guessing.I don't have much to say about development right now but I think the story is heading somewhere, somewhere I would like to see so good luck writing.There aren't many villain stories. I mean there are story about bad guys, but not villains you know, the kind of people you'd love to read about but hate to meet in real life, Sam is that kind of villain. He calls his murder 'hunt', he talks to the dead body of people that he had killed. He is twisted in the head and I like it so good luck writing him.4.8 stars for now, I will recommend this to some of my friends too.
his book was about a bird who didn't yet know how to fly.The bird has to decide if it will try to fly, but it was not sure if it wants to. The bird thought, "If I never forever endeavor" then I won't ever learn. On one wing, he worries he might fail and on the other wing he thinks of how he may succeed. He worries that if he tries, he may get lost in the world. That makes him want to stay in his nest where he's safe.I think this book would help other children to learn that trying new things can be scary, but sometimes when we try, we can find things that make us happy too. And this book will help others know that mistakes are okay and part of learning.
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Been wanting some more Xianxia novels so I hope this is picked.Although the cheat isn't something exactly original, the author as up to 20 chapters has managed to make the story not seem cliche compared to other novels of this style and seems to fleshing out a unique story which I quite enjoyed.If the author keeps up this quality and doesn't fall into a repetitive loop this could be a a very good novel.
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I red already 3 hapter of the Novel and think it is a very good novel, wehn you have to wait for something or drive Bus. While driving to school i normally read like 1 or 2 chapter.
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The quality of the writig is really good. What is problematic is, that the author made the Mc so exceptional to the point that I see no chance of him having any long term alley and companions. They will fall so far behind that they wont be able to contribute after a few chapters. Thats very sad for an ptherwise good story.
If you're going to make your MC a stereotype at least stick with it like it feels like he wants and pursues trouble.
the start of the novel wasnt bad till it reached a certain point where i dont understand most of the characters (some even got their personality changed without a true reason...even the protagonist and noone thought it was strange.........), some characters even got almost cancelled for exemple the purple feathered flame eagles, for the mc they should be extremely important for when he ill be back to the big continent but when he got there Aren got mentioned only one time and no more and there are more like him.... i still read it cause the overall of the story wasnt bad but are you serius about ending this story like this?... truly unsetting.From this point is spoiler:I can understand make him to die like that(i actually didnt understand very much but okay.) but shouldnt he come back to life? why ending this so sad like this? it was never a sad novel so why like this? truly hate this ending .
At this point I like everything, it's intriguing how the guy will handle everything.